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Reviews for Borealis: A Zutara Story

By : jaded_priceless

From ANON - Reader on March 15, 2015
Keep rereading this because how good this is! Though I am wondering when exactly will their tour around the Earth Kingdom will be finished? Since it took several(?) weeks to get there I am guessing it might take a year or so to finish? I absolutely love this ark but wondering if there might be a time skip soon. I guess it's because I want Katara to get pregnant again when she isn't 14. (That came out wrong xD)Nevertheless thank you for writing!
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From ANON - FAVOUR on March 04, 2015
Wow! Qiolian has really been through a lot and I really feel for her. I'm really beginning to feel confused over Katara. While I'm an hopeless romantic I'm beginning to wonder how this will end good for either Zuko or Katara. And how can Katara think Zuko doesn't love her and hates her and when is she finally going to believe that he didn't just rape her because he felt but risked insulting his mother's memory to save her even though it sounds really odd. Then I wonder about that village,that the dead woman was really Aunt Wu wasn't she. Then again what's going with that lady Iroh went to see? When will Iroh catch up with Zuko and when will we see Katara's ex-boyfriend. I really hope that somehow Katara and Zuko will find some way to overcome their differences even though it seems hopeless.
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From Kain on February 28, 2015
Jeez,I hope at some point in the future all the bad karma the Fire nation has racked up will come and bit them in the ass. There ain't no coming back for them. At least Katara now has a female companion who is in a similar situation and thus can relate. And Katara sweetheart, you seem awfully content with a man you claim you will kill one day.

welcome back can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Koi on February 28, 2015
Wow what an amazing 3 chapters! I can't wait until the next chapter, I really do hope that Katara can still birth a child. I can't wait until the chapter! This story is worth the wait! I can't wait until you update the next chapter!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!
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From ANON - Koi on February 21, 2015
I love this story! It took me 3 days to finish this whole story! i love how Katara is slowly growing in feelings with Zuko. I hope you do another oral scene with Katara and Zuko! Please Update SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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From ANON - Guest on January 30, 2015
Update?? Pretty please!!!!
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From ANON - samueladams017 on January 19, 2015
Just want to say this is a very well written story, with a complex story line that I was very surprised to find on this site. So far the story is very good, but the introduction of so many new characters that were not in the original cartoon confuses me sometimes. Past that this is one of my favorite stories I have ever found on Fanfiction.net, or AdultFanfiction.net. Take pride in that, and keep up the good work! Also I want to mention that I am VERY surprised that you have been able to keep writing this story. Most people would have probably abandoned it by now, just for the sheer size of it! Thank you for continuing this story and not abandoning it.
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From ANON - Favour on January 17, 2015
Wow!. I waited so long for this chapter. I love the way you spin in new characters. Its refreshing the way tge old characters are given new layers. Keep it up. I can't but express the view that this story isn't getting as much publicity as it deserves. Maybe you should post it on FF.net. I know I've seen worse things over there. Please please you have to update more often I've been here like six times hoping for a update. Anyway your story is nice. Makes the suspense worth it.
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From ANON - Reader on January 10, 2015
I'll admit it, everyday I have been checking to see if this has been updated. This is my favorite fanfic xD when I saw that you replied that to me, I proceed to fan girl like always. Then you said about part 3 which I can't wait to see! Right now hopping for a time skip or/and water tribe reaction to the Gaangs treatment. Especially between Hakoda and Taruk to Katara xD

Also if you need any help, your fans are always here. (Sorry if I'm being pushy) ^^
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From ANON - Arraye on December 28, 2014
I love the lore you include in your story, but I really hope the Tatsushin Koh lore is not meaning that you will kill Katara and Zuko in the end.
You now I have the feeling Katara has same horrible luck as Zuko, if the part with Fong and Pipsqueak is any indication. The interaction between the Water tribe sibling went as bad as always and Mung being an ass was not surprising, but the threat to kill people how cares about Aang was frightening at least.

I'm bit confused about the ending though. I presume Aang smells the scent of sex on the solders and Katara, but I mean didn't he witnessed what was done to Sokka on the Ursa? Is he so blind to what happening to Katara or just trying to not see the truth?

Anyway thank you for the lovely holiday gift and hope to read more soon.

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From Kain on December 26, 2014
Wow I am terrible at keeping promises of reviews. There are a few stories that I promised to review and I slipped up. At this point I wont make any promises but I will 'try' to get a full review, times be hectic here.

in short:

-3 chapter update!?!?!?!?!? It's a christmas miracle.

-Mung, that hypocritical murdering rapist is gonna try to shame the avatar? It frustrates me and terrifies me that the fire folk buy so much into there own hype that they disregard there monstrosity while condemning others for far less offenses.

-What Sokka and Katara need is to just have a good ol fashioned bare knuckle boxing match to suare there shit away. Terrible timing on her part though now since she was seen willingly laying with Zuko by old allies. Aang is the only person who still trusts her.

-So...super chi blocking? Seems a little contrived but if Aang had the use of his bending it would present a problem to the plot if there were still things to be done in the town.

-The ultimate revenge against Mung would be having Lily see him for what he is and hate him, it would crush him. He doesnt deserve a morality pet, he needs a good ol gelding with a spork.

-Aang is starting to become more and more aware of what is going on around him, which could only end in tears.

-Those smugglers don't seem so different from the fire nation soldiers occupying the town.

-I might have missed mention of it previously but is this a common occurrence at all colonies?

-Those spirits need to pull up there big boy/girl pants and get in the game. Agni's slipping like a motherfucker. Only the deity of a group of people like the fire nation would see any good of zuko and katara's union.

-It's a testament to your writing ability that you can make me care so much about certain characters and this fic and fill me with venom for an entire culture lol.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

Happy Holidays by the way.
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From ANON - Reader on December 22, 2014
:D This is my face while reading this story! I love the fact that Katara doesn't fall in love with Zuko to quick. Plus with over 200~ hapter (bravo might I say) this story is great! Though may I ask some question?
1) When will see the Water Tribe forces again? Really interested to the meeting of Katara and her 'boyfriend' (Who seems like a chill guy ^^)
2) Will Zuko's protectiveness be forever or will it just be a phase with his journey of becoming his own person? (Though I guess you can't really answer that...)
3) When will you update this again? I really new to this site and have no clue on how it works.
4) How the fuck do you seem to know what I want in a Zutara fanfiction? You got the capture, the love, the violence scenes (#noshame) , great wrting style, and a plot that I never want to end.
5) Can I give you a highfive?

Thank you~
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From ANON - Zutara4lyfe on December 21, 2014
Update?
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From ANON - Master Bender on December 18, 2014
Good story :)
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From ANON - Arraye on December 16, 2014
I still dislike Mung, because of the part about how he got "little Lily", but I loved the part about the first Lily.

So Ozai got the letter from Azula about the establishment of Ursa House in this remote Earth kingdom city and will make an appearance? This could be very ugly for Zuko, but also for the refugees. I can see Ozai burning down the House with the occupants inside.
It's so unfair that Zuko get the appreciation and Katara only scorn from the city inhabitants.
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