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Reviews for What's wrong with me?

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - Just a fan on June 13, 2021

    This is the best httyd fic I've read . Please more 


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  • From ANON - D on June 11, 2021

    plz update 


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2021

    Very, very nice.

    Mildew is extremely rare and I'm glad you are writing this. Hope to see the next update soon.


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  • From ANON - on June 05, 2021

    You know, every time i read this i hope it'll end up with something like this

    https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EzY2YYEVIAoZlkV?format=jpg&name=large


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  • From migahiru on May 24, 2021

    I accidentally skipped a few chapters of the previous ones and here's what I wanted to say. I like the direction in which the plot went and Astrid's torment looks quite consistent, so we need to build up this detail of the story and constantly put her in a hopeless position, so that she gets even more excited, and her inaccessibility slowly goes away in the coming days.

    One more detail. Mildew was part of Drago's army in the last episode of Dragons Race to the Edge, and one more motive could be mentioned - to become Chief Berk and completely subdue Astrid, make her his chieftess, but to be Drago Bludvist's puppet indefinitely.


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  • From ANON - c197 on May 23, 2021

    Interesting having Astrid disobey Mildew, maybe good chance for him to start defiling other girls too


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  • From ANON - on May 22, 2021

    I prefer this turn of events


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  • From ninesenshi on May 21, 2021

    Chap13, not great, some sexy, mixed feelings.  Well, now that Hiccup's mum is here Mildew definitely has to start fucking her. 


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  • From ANON - on May 20, 2021

    great update! I'm glad it's just not all smut and there's actual plot 


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  • From ANON - hi on May 20, 2021

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  • From ANON - on May 20, 2021

    Even though there wasn't any sex between Astrid and Mildew, it was still hot that Astrid finally wanting Mildew to have sex with her. The part where Astrid touches herself while spying on Mildew was nice. And Astrid saying things she would say if she was in Ruffnut's place. But best of all, is when she made that deal to have Mildew have anal with her, and they she wanted it so bad.

    In the next chapter, can you actually make Astrid say all those things when she has sex with Mildew again. And do a pregnant sex scene, make it hotter, that Astrid is having sex with Mildew with either Hiccup's kid or Mildew's. 


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  • From ANON - ANON on May 17, 2021

    This is of course very good, but I wanted more Mildew/Astrid


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  • From ANON - on May 15, 2021

    Well that was unexpected. If you're gonna have Mildew fucking other girls I'd suggest adding heather 


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  • From ANON - on May 14, 2021

    I've been waiting for a lot, and now I'm waiting for changes with Astrid.


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  • From ninesenshi on May 14, 2021

    Chap12, pretty good, looking forward to next time


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