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By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - on January 17, 2022

    Merlin, if you have writers block, read this story from AO3. 

    https://archiveofourown.org/works/36449812?view_adult=true


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  • From ANON - Yes on December 21, 2021

    Like the story, and hope you are continuing with it


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  • From ANON - Guest on November 09, 2021

    Any chance of an update soon? Love the story and can't wait to see what happens next


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  • From ANON - EunkEunk on October 12, 2021

    Awesome story, its getting pretty exciting now hope you continue soon

     


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  • From ANON - on October 08, 2021

    When the world needed him the most...... he vanished 😔


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  • From ANON - on October 05, 2021

    Idea for future chapter:

    1) Astrid sees Valka walking with Mildew to a spot that no one can see them, and when she gets there, she sees her mother-in-law on her knees with Mildew's cock in her mouth. Astrid sees Valka doing it herself and sometimes see Mildew grabbing her head to make him enjoy it more. Astrid doesn't get horrified by this but instead gets turned on. So much that she touches herself imagining that it was her in Valka's place. 

    2) After Valka finished, Astrid hears about Mildew coming to her house tonight. That night, like when she spied on Mildew with Ruffnut, she does the same with Mildew and Valka, with Valka riding him and getting filled up. 

    3) Next day, Astrid approaches Mildew, but instead of telling him what she saw, she tells him to meet her in the cove, making him think she wants to discuss other things. 

    4) After Mildew finished with Valka, he goes to the cove. When he gets there Astrid comes out from the opening under the tree, wearing a large coat. When she gets to Mildew, she takes off the coat, gets down on her knees, takes out his cock, and sucks him off. After that she made him finish inside her mouth, she swallows the whole load, moaning the taste she missed so much. Mildew couldn't believe what happened, but what happened next shocked him even more, Astrid pushes him down and rides him until she was satisfied after a few rounds, and she keeps on calling herself "his whore". 

    7) After Astrid finished, she gets off and tells Mildew what she saw with Valka. But instead of reporting him, she tells him that from now on, after he has his fun with Valka, she has her fun with Mildew to satisfy her needs that Hiccup can never provide. So basically, they both win, Mildew finally gets his obsession, and Astrid gets her needs satisfied. 

    8) For Valka, the part where Mildew says she can't have sex with anyone else without his say so, put in a few gangbang scenes in there because that is what that part sounds like. 


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  • From ANON - on August 16, 2021

    And will there be further development history with the Roll, since it is more interesting than with Ruffnut


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  • From ANON - on August 15, 2021

    We can't wait for the new chapter 16


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  • From ANON - on August 12, 2021

    Merlin, please give us an update. You are getting a lot of dragon prints, proof that more people are getting interested in your story. So please update.


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  • From ANON - on August 10, 2021

    We are looking forward to the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - ANON on August 05, 2021

    A great idea with Valka, I want even more scenes between these two, since Mildew's revenge should be a priority.


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  • From ANON - on August 03, 2021

    We need that update, king!


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  • From migahiru on August 02, 2021

    It's interesting to come up with Valka, we are also waiting for something similar with Astrid. Although a gangbang here can be very perfect to look at.


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  • From ANON - on July 22, 2021

    Hey Merlin, Bob does have a point. Why not publish this story on AO3 or fanfiction. This story should be read by others if they knew about it. 


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  • From ANON - Bob on July 19, 2021

    Great story!! Also have you ever thought about publishing this story on other sites? Like archiveofourown? Feel like you would get more readers 


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