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By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ninesenshi on April 24, 2021

    Chap10, very hot, good anal. Hope to read more soon. Maybe he should fuck her dragon also, since Astrid and her are so close. Could be a good bonding experience. I hope you are feeling better.

    PS I hope this ends with Astrid firmly owned by Mildew.  No `rescue' nonsense


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  • From ANON - on April 23, 2021

    Another great chapter, and you finally put in an anal scene, nice. Keep up the good work. 
     

    Maybe you should put in a scene where Astrid has sex with Hiccup, and when she has sex with Mildew again, she realizes she gets more satisfied with mildew. So mildew can use that fact to his advantage to break her.

    it would be better if the dream was real, where Astrid and Hiccup are married and Astrid cheats on him with Mildew, to satisfy her needs that Hiccup can't. But Astrid would have Hiccup's children. She only uses Mildew to relieve her itch.


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  • From ANON - on April 22, 2021

    really enjoyed chp 9. Hope for more to come 


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  • From ANON - on March 31, 2021

    Cant wait for the next update!


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  • From ANON - Adonisaquarian on March 29, 2021

    Hey Merlin.. Any chance of an update for Wrong Night Wrong Man your Castle story ?

    really loved that fic. 


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  • From ninesenshi on March 18, 2021

    Chap9, good chap, enjoyable.  Hopefully we'll read a lot more of Astrid being fucked, eventually in the butt as well.  Maybe that will break her.

    Most of the words speak of too much plot, but hopefully it will be sexy. I'd like her to get knocked up and read some preggo sex. Dragon sex would also be fun.  Hope to read more soon.


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  • From ANON - on March 15, 2021

    FINALLY lol


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  • From ANON - on March 13, 2021

    Talk about keeping us in suspense. Been waiting for a new chapter after the last. But after a while, you came up with an amazing chapter. And this time, you write about Astrid losing her virginity to Mildew. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter, and very curious about what the hints will come about in the story. 

    Side question: how long are they going to have sex, because in the chapter, you put something about a "Hofferson Quest", how many days is Mildew going to break in Astrid before they return to Berk? Because it would be very interesting if Astrid's mind broke after a few sessions and she can only think about getting pleasure from only Mildew, even after getting married to Hiccup. 


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  • From ANON - on March 10, 2021

    Really diggin the last two chapters. can't wait for more to come


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  • From ninesenshi on March 04, 2021

    Chap8, good to see another part.  Maybe he can fuck the dragon also, that should mess with Astrid.  Looking forward to more


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  • From ANON - Shado on February 28, 2021

    Very good chapter i'm very excited to see where astrid and mildew are going? 


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  • From ANON - Ghost on February 25, 2021

    Loved the new chapter!! Really never thought I'd see the day I'd root for someone like Mildew lmao. 


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  • From ANON - Guest on February 23, 2021

    This was a good chapter.

    Ideas I had for future chapters if you want to continue: 1) the next time they are at the cove, Mildew takes Astrid's anal cherry first. 2) after a few times of anal, Astrid breaks down and wants him to take her virginity before Hiccup after her comparison between them. 3) Astrid finds out Mildew's identity after some time, but instead of reporting him, she continues to having a secret affair with him whenever they get a chance, like oral in the woods, vaginal or anal in Mildew's cabin.

    These are just my ideas, maybe you can get inspiration from them to how you want your story to go or use them in your future chapters if there is like a time gap between your ideas and mine. 


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  • From ANON - Shado on February 21, 2021

    The chapter was really good and i think since astrid is behaving more and more like a whore she  should also dress like a whore in the next chapters. 


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