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By : immo

From AvengingRaven on January 02, 2011
I was just curious why you left out To Become A Snake which you have as Chapter 29 at a different location!!!
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From firelarc on July 07, 2008
wow didnt expect such a sad and depressing ending. :C poor kim and shego and the other woman. well it was well writen and i liked the story. too bad about the terribly sad ending though
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From immortal7 on July 22, 2007
this is one of the first kigo fics i ever read and i just happen to be wandering around bored and i saw it was updated. I love the way you brought everything back to gether all i can say is the ending hurt. i want to now how that last fight turns out. And i really feel for Kim. Loved the story later
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From LesbianLovers on July 19, 2007
Yay! Fantastic continuation of a great KiGo tale!
Love,
Heather and Anna
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From ANON - TeaRose on December 10, 2006

That's not the final chapter, is it? There's going to be more. Right? Right? ;_;
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From ANON - justsumguy on September 12, 2006
this is gr8!!!! couldnt stop readin, cant wait 4 da nxt chapter!!!
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From ANON - BlackestNight on July 09, 2006
Please, Please write somemore. This story is completly awesome and I can't stand not knowing how it ends.

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From ANON - Jay on July 07, 2006
I started reading this fic today, but couldn't tear my eyes away. I was very dissapointed when I had to go eat. An internal battle consisting basically of, "need food. but need pretty story. NEED FOOD."
I eventually realized that it was better to go ahead and eat, as I wasn't getting much from the story at that point. xD
Anyway. You had me hooked at the first chapter, and I can't wait for there to be more.
Shego's so cool, you just can't deny it. But can be cold, and you've portrayed it well. (though, truthfully, i usually can't get enough fluff.)

One last thing, before I... stop writing? I have a habit of reading the chapter titles when I begin the story. Don't know why, just do. And from the beginning, I was fangirling over "Goodbye, Love". I wasn't certain if it had anything to do with Rent at the time. But cool.

And now I'm rambling. So I'll shut up.
:D
Again, I can't wait for there to be more, thanks for writing it.
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From ANON - tally_beoulve on February 09, 2006
Ah.... Rent. The voices were so much better in the movie than the broadway soundtrack. In my opinion, anyway. *nodnod* I love Mimi as well. As should we all. Muahaha. Mmmm. I'm happy that you mentioned the little battle for supremacy between Shego and Kim... at first I was wondering if I'd missed something in a previous chapter because I was like "Shego's what? Kim's going where? What's going ON??" but, no, you fixed it, and it was gooder. I'm still sad about the entire thing, and await anxiously for the next chapter.
Btw, you changed tenses at least once in the beginning of the chapter. I forget exactly where because I'm distracted....anyhoo. SHEGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I had to let that out. Sorry. Mmmmm. I wonder if Kim will figure things out. And what about the spell Shego cast on Kim's eyes. Oooh, cataracts? As in, make Kim blind cataracts? That might...ummm... need to be worded differently. Maybe. Possibly. I don't know. Anyhoo. I'm getting yelled at, so.... IMMO!!!!!!! Much love and anticipation for the next chapters! Much love!!!!!!!
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From ANON - BlackestNight on February 04, 2006
OH MY GOD!!! That was good but........oh my God. I need the next chapter. Dang........
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From ANON - Chris on February 02, 2006
Great chapter.
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From ANON - MySweetOblivion_On_P.G. on January 30, 2006
First off, all I would like to say congradulations on another great chapter of this great fan fiction. Now I want to apologize to you... this review is going to be very long. Sorry. Sorry Again...

OK. New first off. NO, we don't want the story to rush to an end! We have all ready said this to you on more than one occation. This is a very, very good story that has captured the attention of damn near every one out there that reads Kim Possible fan fiction and we actually don't mind the fact that the story keeps on barreling forward. We just hate having to wait for the next chapter to come out so that we can get our fix of the newest chapter of 'A Few New Tricks', immo. Every time we sign on to AFF and find out that the newest chapter is up our imagination kicks into overdrive and we are taken back to the world that you have created for all of the Kim Possible crew members. Even if a person isn't a fan of the series this story is good enough to stand on its own but, the fact that you have fabricated such an enthralling tale for our most adored television characters and plausably depicted a senarrio in which we can get action, adventure, romance, comedy, tragedy, educational, and all of that KIGOy goodness that got us hooked in the first place has made this story a must read for all of us fans out here. I'm not sayin' your story is perfect, but it is pretty damn close for a fan fictin and has a massive fan base following that will probably be sad when it is finally over with. One thing about your story that I will say that does bother me a little is the fact that Ron, even though I know that for the purpose of this story he is a very minor character and that a lot of people don't seem to like him very much, I do think that he has been a bit to out of character during the course of this story for my likings. Yes, Ron is a buffoon and yes, Ron is afraid of damn near every thing out there in the world and yes, he does spaz out way too much on the show to be taken seriously by pretty much any of the villinous population other than Gill and Monkey Fist, but the kid wouldn't be as tame as he is in this story. I very much doubt that he would take such a lax aprouch to Team Possible and I know he wouldn't put up with Jim's attitude towards him. I also doubt that his skills would fall so far behind in there developement, especially with Kim disapperring on him and then him finding out that she had been kidnapped by Shego. He has always been very protective of Kim on the show, so it would only follow suit that he would try to improve so as to be able to help Kim escape. But hey, it's your great story and we'll all read it anyway so it don' matter. I just review because I care about the story and want to see it come out to be the best that it can be. Still, you are doing a fabulous job with it and I hope to see another great chapter some time in the near future.

Oops! Damn again. This is a lot longer than I originally meant to write for this. Sorry AGAIN for the long review. I didn't mean for it to be QUITE this long but it just happened to come out that way. ANyways, please update soon.

Sincerely,
MySweetOblivion_On_P.G.
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From ANON - Cody on January 10, 2006
this fanfic is fucking awesom i recomend this to everyone
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From ANON - tally_beoulve on January 06, 2006
IMMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't been online in ages, and then I almost freaked out because I thought you'd added like, tons of chapters without me reading, and then I'd have to catch up and junk and I'd be all sorts of sad. This chapter seemed relatively shorter than the other ones... didn't rush it, did you? =P It's great to hear that you've started chapter 28 and have 27 all done... before you get mauled by rabid fans foaming at the mouth because you didn't update, you should probably put it up here. ^_~ You know. Just for me, if you still love me and such. XD In a nonsexual way of course...
In other happy notes...
BIRDIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! You just have to go and carry on and show me a tiny cameo of the birdie and that's it.... *sigh* Sometimes you make me sad... but not that much. ^_^ I'm happy we got to see him. Fun fun. Ummmm... I don't know why, but this chapter feels a little...bland. Not quite sure why. Building up tension and such, but, it doesn't quite feel like it's at the breaking point yet. Hmmmm. I don't know. Maybe I'm just thrown off by the fact that Shego is completely somewhere else away from Kim, and there is a deep and empty hole where my heart once was because my heart goes with them wherever they go. Possibly. Perhaps.
Meantime...ummm... I hope you had awesome holidays and a good new year's and such, and didn't get burnt out from working like I did. Oh, and I hope you got what you wanted for Christmas. That's very important. You should always have those. *nodnod* Anyhoo. I'm going to go work on my story that I haven't written in forever, ever since I ended up working 40 hours for a seasonal job.... ^_^;;; so, yesh. That, and I'm going to go look for neat R.O.D. the T.V. fics, that are hopefully well done. But I probably won't find any, and have to go work on my story. Eeeesh. Anyhoo.... as ever and always, waiting for your next update, immo. ^_~ Much love!!
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From ANON - fireinu on December 23, 2005
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