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By : immo
  • From ANON - kitty on August 07, 2005
    Bad? That was actually pretty good. ive read some pretty bad ones, and that wasnt bad at all. itd be nice if you'd finish it tho :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2005
    You do NOT do badly with the training AND the sex scenes (wow... ^___^). Anyways, it was kinda funny to see Kim going around being all lustful and jealous. Looking forward to the next update. = )
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  • From ANON - lady_of_tormentdeath on August 07, 2005
    I'm glad you posted on here. Fanfiction.net are a bit of a prick, aren't they? That was a grate chapter. It feels like something big is going to happen soon. can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Blaze on August 06, 2005
    This story is so cool.Update Soon
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  • From ANON - Mike9 on August 06, 2005
    That was an interesting chapter. Not as dark as I was expecting it to be, but definatly interesting. Not so sure the scene was as expressly needed but it is your story and I'll follow it however it turns out. The prospects for the future seem delightful within this story. But what's happened to the rest of the world, that's sparked my curiosity. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - genesgirl on August 06, 2005
    YAY!!!!!!!!!

    I love me some Kigo-y goodness.

    You don't suck at writing sex scenes. I like that you talk about their surroundings and their emotions, instead of just being completely blunt and using dialogue like, "OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH, I'M CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMING!"

    Yeah.

    I enjoy your sex scenes.
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