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Reviews for Crossed Lines

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  • From ANON - hot shot on March 05, 2013
    Wow love the drama the tragedy with johny and Mary. Can't wait to see what happends next with johny
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  • From vic_elor on March 03, 2013
    I just finished reading the story up through "all hell will break loose." You really took the blank spot I had left in my story (between the ending and the post-script) and really went to town with it! I really enjoyed reading it, especially since you did such a good job filling out all the characters. Having all the side segments involving the parents gave the story a greater sense of realism and showing the parents secret fantasies adds a unique family layer onto the story of sibling love.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on February 22, 2013
    Thanks for the update love the drama and everything that is happening keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on February 17, 2013
    Wow love the drama you put in this chapter and you also reveal Lila's fantasy as well. It's asome that you finally show as to why they spend so much time away from home just by themselfs can't wait to see what happends next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on February 13, 2013
    Wow asome update now the battles are going to hard on johny because every one wants a piece of johny can't wait to see what happends next
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  • From ANON - hot shot on February 08, 2013
    Wow johny us really in a vine and now sissy is making plans what other dripping to come keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 29, 2013
    Wow asome chapter wonder what lila's fantasy is and what will happend then the circumstances come to that point hope to see more
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 23, 2013
    Wow the girls are exsated about johny now they will begin to test whats wrong with him and there mother worry about johny wow can't wait to.see what happeds. Next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 22, 2013
    The price for condoms wow poor johny what other miss hap will befall on him keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 16, 2013
    Poor johny the stuff he has to to get a condom well hopefully he takes his time to get home and dose not cross pads with Sissi or else he's going to have big problems keep them coming.
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  • From Darkon on January 10, 2013
    What gets me is that the twins automatically assume that JOHNNY is the one with the fertility problem. Granted, they perform all manner of bizarro experiments on him, but they've done a fair number on each other if memory serves. Wouldn't that be something if they discover they're both totally barren, or worse, mutated?
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 07, 2013
    Love the chapter especially the part that show that there's was something wrong with johny and now Sussy knows what happend to her memories. Hope to see more of your updates soon keep up the great work
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  • From vic_elor on December 16, 2012
    Wow, you sure have come a long way from my noble beginnings!
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  • From ANON - hot shot on December 14, 2012
    Love the two updates you posted love it plus i want to trow in the idea that Mary and susan's experiments did something to johny that would not let them get pregnant and have to find a way to fix this mess they both made but that's just an idea also they should sound prof johny's room for there special time hope to see more updates soon keep them coming
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  • From Darkon on November 09, 2012
    Okay, disregard any suggestion I made about throwing in a titfuck in a later chapter. Had I known the...mechanics of the act were beyond Susan and Mary's "capabilities" beforehand, I would've kept my mouth shut, heh.
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