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Reviews for Crossed Lines

By : Belfry
  • From ANON - hot shot on May 01, 2013
    Wow what can I say will see how the next adventure takes jonny and his love
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 28, 2013
    Short but asome live the little reminder of gil there keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 23, 2013
    Wow what will jonny do now that all of this is happening and what other adventures will happens next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 17, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming wonder what will hapend next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 14, 2013
    Wowlove the chapter and the camera was a nice touch can't wait to see what happened next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 12, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming what to do what to do poor johnny what is he going to do now it keeps getting better keep them coming
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on April 11, 2013
    Short chapter but it got to the point quickly and sets up for the next bit. Hope to see it continued soon.
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  • From Darkon on April 10, 2013
    I really don't feel comfortable asking this of you, but please, PLEASE disregard the guy (girl?) asking for slash. It's already bad enough that I can't get decent Xenosaga/SatAM/UC Gundam smut anymore (never got much for that last one to begin with) since it's all been hijacked by by horny fangirls and their M/M garbage, so the last thing I want is for JT to suffer the same fate. I know this whole site was BUILT by people who go for that sort of thing, but don't they have enough of that material already?

    Besides, does anybody here REALLY want to suffer the indignity of having to read about that clod Gil, fumbling his way through some awkward sexual encounter with Johnny? I sure as Hell don't.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 09, 2013
    Wow swine chapter wonder what will Johnny do now will he fall into the trap or surpass it keep them coming
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2013
    About time Sissy came back into the story
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 07, 2013
    Wow poor johnny can't wait and see what will happened next keep them coming
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  • From Darkon on April 02, 2013
    I should've known you'd be the first person to FINALLY write something relating to that crazy Rule 63-themed episode, and it didn't come a moment too soon. That whole episode has fanfic potential written all over it (among other things), yet until now nobody has even bothered with it. I'm looking forward to how you'll portray the action between Johnny/the twins and their alternate dimension counterparts.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 01, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming hope to see what happends next
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  • From ANON - hot shot on April 01, 2013
    Asome fic livo the update can't wait and see what's next
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  • From vic_elor on March 06, 2013
    I had to stop for a second on this chapter and rub my eyes... Not because I was crying but because I wanted to make sure I wasn't seeing things.

    What made you change your mind on the ending of chapter "forgiveness?"
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