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By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - psychojuggalo on July 08, 2011
    Hey, I've been reading this story forever and i thought id post another comment like the one on the DT Files. I really enjoy your writing, You are probably my favorite writer on here, thanks for the entertainment dude.
    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Magnesium on September 13, 2010
    I laughed, I cried, I was really in love with this story. Man, you're good.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 20, 2010
    Becky and Huggy collapse on the bed exhausted. Wow, that sentance sounds so messed up out of context. Well one fanfic might be coming to an end, but there's always room for others. Maybe a fanfic about a teenage Carina battling crime on Mars.

    You just had to throw in alien tentacle monsters, didn't you? No I don't think Wordgirl could kill again. Look back at all the agony Wordgirl went through last time. True it was justified in defense of Carina, but having to kill someone tore her apart. Doing that again could destroy Becky completely.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 19, 2010
    Well the founding of the colonies on Mars might make a good wrap up. Becky takes note that her world is getting bigger, but so is the group of people she can depend on. Man I can see that Tim has some explaining to do. I only hope there's something left of Tim afterwards.

    Maybe we could end it with a little epilogue. Carina, now a teenager herself, has taken up as the Wordgirl of mars with Arianna in a sort of Huggy role?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 18, 2010
    Ah, Wordgirl gets to explore the wonderful world of beauracracy. First off minor nitpick it's not go between person, it's just go between. Second, I hate to say it, there is no way in hell Lexicon and Decimal will be able to build military bases on Mars's moons, it's simply not going to happen.

    There's a couple of resons for this. First, as you said Earth controls thel Sol system, which is what it's called by the way. There's no way in hell they'd allow other planets to have full sized military instaliations in their place, treaty or no treaty. It's nothing person, it's common sense.

    Second, Wordgirl would never allow it. Thjs is suppose to be a peaceful union and the idea of having armed Lexicon and Decimal soldiers on Mars goes against everything she stands for. I know Lexicon is mostly a democracy now, but that doesn't mean they want to piss off their empress. In fact Earth shouldn't have a full military base their either.

    The presence on Mars should focus mainly on exploration and discovery, with token military outposts focusing on defense. Oh, one thing about Tobey's mom watching the baby, Violet has parents, too. Oh and for the records stalker never say they're stalking someone. They just believe they're pursuing an innocent relationship. They don't see themselves as actually doing anything wrong.

    That being said, I could see a certain girl borrowing a certain suit of battle armor and using it to get Tim's attention. Seriously, do Tim and Becky even know about that thing yet?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 17, 2010
    Great way to wrap up the season. Just one issue though. Earth may not have advanced technology, but Mars is in their solar system and rightfully belongs to them. I know the Earth itself doesn't have the ablity to state the claim, but Wordgirl does. She's not going to let Earth get swept aside so casually.

    She'll make it clear in no uncertain terms that Lexicon and Decimal may have a colony there, but it still belongs to Earth. Heck Wordgirl could even insist that humans be transported to Mars to found a Earth colony. Of course being an important individual Wordgirl could act as a go between for Earth and the Colony. Just an idea. That could be a potential focus for the new season, Establishing the Earth colony and reactions of people living on Mars.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 14, 2010
    No, they have business of their own to deal with and a lot of messes to clean up.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 13, 2010
    This provides an interesting twist. If even they manage to take Calipso down Mars would still be terraformed and potentially liveable. Here's a thought, maybe Caelum and Emma could start work on a colony there. Maybe governing a colony could finally give caelum some focus in his life.

    Even if they manage to push callisto back Zaniah is going to have her hands full trying to take back her empire. There's still a long road ahead for her. Heck if she tried Wordgirl might even be able to arrange a treaty between dimensions.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 13, 2010
    She was breathing normally and even talking casually with the narrator. It was one of the early shorts. Ah, that's the problem with empires, the rulers always have to be watching their backs. Could this be the start of a new beginning for Zaniah, or won't it be so easy for her to change her ways?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 12, 2010
    Nice touch with the lust cannons. Reminds me of an episode of Star Trek where the entire crew was infected with a bacteria that made them all act drunk. Rather surprising that Caelum and Emma got married like that with no one else around.

    Still I can understand it, they still have a lot to do, there was only time for a quick ceremony. Maybe after Zaniah is taken care of they'll go back and do it right? I suppose the Huntress could care less about it though.

    Oh interesting note, Wordgirl has stood, unproected, on the surface of the moon before. Presumably she can breath in space. And if she can, so can Tim and the X weapons. Perhaps the best way to deal with Zaniah is at the source. After all the fastest way to kill a snake is to cut off the head.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 11, 2010
    First off, epic battle. Caelum sounds like he's just getting frustrated, but I'm sure Emma can help him through it. You know there are plenty of other towns in this world. Maybe what Caelum and Emma really need is a change of scenery?

    Who knows, perhaps there's a town out there where X and X3 could make their own mark. Right now people see them as copies of Math Whiz and Wordgirl, they need a place where they can stretch their wings and make their own mark. Withing visiting distance, of course. But I think it's time for them to find their own names. X and X3 are kind of generic and people just see them as a sort of Wordgirl and Math Whiz 2.0 They need to make an identity of their own.

    But of course that'll have to wait. Zaniah isn't done just yet. There's still an epic space battle to deal with. And don't forget, back on Decimal Huggy is a famous pilot. I know it's been a while, but maybe he still has one good dog fight left in him?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 07, 2010
    No, I mean that Violet just left a newborn baby alone in science lab to go off and fight in a war suit. I know Violet can get a bit distracted sometimes, but you really think she'd do that? I'm just saying that maybe Violet would have thought to leave the baby somewhere safe first, like with Tobey's mom?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 07, 2010
    That does bring up a point. What the heck is Violet going to do with Arianna? She can't just leave a newborn alone in Tobey's lab.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 06, 2010
    Ooh, this is getting good, like that quiet moment before the thunderstorm.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 05, 2010
    Intersting idea. I was just going to have it be battle armor with Wordgirl's color scheme. But actually having the battle suit look like Worgirl, that is a nice touch. I had an idea of Tracie more wanting to show up Wordgirl than just get in on the action, but that works.

    One thing though, Zaniah's universe is a darker place. In that universe it wouldn't be a heart of knowledge, maybe a heart of chaos? Ooh, are we buidling up to powered up Becky facing off against powered up Zaniah? I see Becky wanting to handle the empress personally. Zaniah is a bad reminder of what Becky herself could have been and I wouldn't be surprise if Becky takes it personally.
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