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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 03, 2010
    Good start so far. Though, now that I think about it, it might have been a good idea to give the girl a bit more of personality than just a young girl, or at the very least a name. Not sure what though.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on July 30, 2010
    Right now after everthing that's happened, I think Becky and Tim need to just take some time, relax and focus on being a family with Carina. Plus Violet and Tobey are starting a family of their own. You think Violet would move in with Tobey?

    Anyway I have some possible ideas, but I don't want to make a gigantic review. I'll get into details in an email.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on July 28, 2010
    I like the idea of keeping Becky and Tim's ceremony simple. It's a calm moment before the coming chaos of the public ceremony. God the guest list for that thing is going to be a mile long.
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  • From ANON - invinible on January 24, 2010
    I know the song in chapter 100. Self Proof is Invincible. I just don't know which band plays it.
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  • From ANON - Magnesium-[Mg12] on November 25, 2009
    Finally made it to chapter 141, my god i hope this isn't the end cause this was just the best thing since sliced bread. What happened to Carina helping out the team? I think The Butcher and Chuck the Evil Sandwhich making Guy should join the team or at least be reserve members like tobey. I always wondered if The Butcher could create food without stopping couldn't he go to starving countries and give food?
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  • From ANON - Magnesium-[Mg12] on November 24, 2009
    Ive been kinda afraid to review...I dont know why but seriously im loving this fic its the kinda stuff that makes you wish that the actual show would go one forever.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 17, 2009
    One quick point, helmet cams are really only needed when large ammounts of action are involved. For people standing around asking questions a standard camera or even a pad and a pencil will do just fine.

    Hmm, Tobey providing robotic security for Wordgirl's wedding. Can you say advertising opportunity?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 16, 2009
    Oh, they think this is annoying so far? Just wait till they public announcement. Of course Becky's mom is going to insist on a press conference. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to the news that Wordgirl and Math Whiz are getting married.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 15, 2009
    Heh, you think the wedding is gonna be fun, just wait till the honeymoon. You think a trip to Lexicon would make a good honeymoon? You know that royal retreat Becky was hiding at that one time. Like it'd matter where they went. That does bring up a point. How long after giving birth until a Lexiconian is able to get pregnant again? It's been two years since Carina was born. Becky and Tim better be careful or Carina could wind up getting a little brother out of this.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 14, 2009
    Odd that Carina could remember in such detail. It happened over a year ago and children rarely remember anything from so early in their lives. You know, it just occured to me. Some states have special laws that allow people sixteen and older to get married, as long as they have parental permission and get a marriage liscense.

    Maybe Becky starts getting the idea that Tim is trying to keep something from her. She gets a little annoyed by it, but has to stay focused. But after the trial, Tim states that he's been doing some research and the state they live in allows marriages like that.

    Tim knows that the trial is really stressing Becky out. And what better way to cheer her up, than to finally walk down the aisle? Of course this leads to two isssues. If Becky and Tim get married, Wordgirl and Math Whiz would also have to arrange a wedding. A more public spectacle.

    Imagine all the troubles Wordgirl and Math Whiz face on a day to day basis. Now add in all the insanity a wedding entails, the through those things together.

    A few possabilities.

    Becky;s mom, Tim's mom and Tim's grandma in a bridal shop, arguing over the wedding dress, that Becky is trying. Becky, out of sheer embarrasment, wishes she could just sink through the floor.

    Of course Butcher and Chuck would do the catering. I could see Professor Two-Brains giving Wordgirl a break on her big day, of course a lot of the other villains sure wouldn't.

    Eileen taking the opportunity to grab Caelmum during the wedding and attempting to stage her own impromptu ceremony.

    Becky's dad running all over the place, being himself. Goodness knows there are plenty of embarrasment possabilities.

    Huggy could serve as Tim's best man. Somehow, I doubt Caeulum would like the idea.

    Speaking of, everyone's reaction to having to get dressed up.

    Carina, not having a clue what's going on, watching the chaos unfold and enjoying every minute of it.

    And of course, we top it off, by having Violet go into labor during the reception.

    What do you think?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 13, 2009
    Wait, snapped his neck? I thought she just flat out chucked him into space.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 12, 2009
    At first I was questioning the logic of bringing a two year old along to fight crime. I mean she deserves to at least try to have a normal child hood. But Carina's small size and light weight make her a seriously small target. Coupled with how fast she can move, I think she can keep it. I hate to say this, but maybe you should have her scratched up just a little bit, just to show her that this isn't a game. I just wouldn't want to be the baddie that does the scrathing, especially when Becky gets her hands on them.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 10, 2009
    PARTY! Heh, couldn't resist. This is looking to heat up, can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on August 09, 2009
    Ok, no offense, but there are there are other ways to make up new baddies, that playing to stereotpyes. I mean Arabian Bomber and now this? What's next, an overwheight Elvis impersonator? And every baddy in town doesn't have to join the ring. We don't want the group getting too big. I know Team Alphanumeric is getting bigger, but some baddies should still be able to manage on their own.

    That is a good idea, though. For all their strength, Team Alphanumeric can't be everywhere. Sooner or later, the numbers are going to start catching up to them.

    Heh, that is a fun idea. Of Carina would have to come into court as Wordgirl's daughter, os her identity would have to be protected. Of course they have special screens they put up around the witness stand, for witnesses who prefer not to be identified. But they'd still have to use an alias.

    I could imagine trying to find a costume for herself, in the most appropriate place, her parents closet. That could lead to some akward moments. Maybe a towel for a cap, rubber gloves from the kitchen, some left over ski goggles. Of course, Becky would have to gently explain to her daughter. And Becky and Tim could sit around trying to come up with super hero names for Carina. Of course, they'd get totally caught up in how cute the names were, which would annoy the living heck out of Carina.

    Ultimately, it's up to you, but whatever you come up with, should work fine.
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  • From Otakuman486 on August 09, 2009
    Sounds like it's time to give Carina a supernym may I suggest ScholastiKid?
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