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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From ANON - Bookfisher on June 06, 2016
    And thats how you write a good porn-romp
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  • From NarutosBrat on August 28, 2013
    Heh, I found a picture that portrays Kim's punishment quite nicely. Go to rule34 . xxx

    Then after that, type in the below search option exactly as it is. Should be the first picture. If it says something about being overloaded, just activate the search again.

    ron_stoppable kimberly_ann_possible bonnie_rockwaller
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  • From NarutosBrat on August 28, 2013
    Open relationship? Somehow, I get the feeling that it's only going to be a one way thing unless you count Kim with other girls.
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  • From ANON - big guest on July 06, 2013
    I was thinking of the moment where Kim was about to get caught by Ron that maybe that's where the new story can begin. Kim gets caught by Ron and has to explain why they are in that position. After telling what happens in the first chapter (though telling it a bit differently) Kim explains that she can't go without his dick. After giving it some thought (and caving in to the puppy dog pout) he agrees to be her boyfriend and have hardcore sex in different places of the house.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Aanonymous on November 25, 2012
    dude you really need to do a side story of your deep sleeper story with jessica and ron. people need to read a dominatrix story.

    oh and you up for a challenge?
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  • From Sabbs on April 30, 2010
    I really liked the story, you write well...better than me it seem...darn you good writers you...grrrrr. Well i hope you write another tale, I will be there to read it as well. Take care, oh and thanks bunches for giving my story a try as well and commenting, that was really nice.

    Toodles Sabbs
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  • From tealrain on November 18, 2009
    Liked the idea. Very hott. :)
    Reading on now, Sexi Writer Man. Lol
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  • From Zarrthtion on October 20, 2009
    good story very funny....all-in-all a great read
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  • From skoshi4 on February 27, 2009
    I liked the little menage-a-trois with Ron, Liz, and Marcella, but would like to think that after Ron's anal dalliance with Hope, Marcella would want to avoid the chance of a raging infection and make sure that he would pee and clean his peter with lots of soap before he got it anywhere near her. Yeah, I know that it's erotica and everybody's squeaky clean and nobody has an STD, but still....
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  • From skoshi4 on January 13, 2009
    So far, so good. I can see why you've gotten 40K+ hits.
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  • From vegeta6529 on November 15, 2008
    OMG that was so fing awesome really good ending. but i was just wondering does ron actually help take care of the kid or does he just pay for it, and will kim ever get pregnant.
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  • From Ffourteen on February 29, 2008
    Most fun I've had reading a fic in awhile. Thanks for writing it.
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  • From reallycorking on February 27, 2008
    fan-FUCKING-tastic. the end.
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  • From Jayrich on February 11, 2008
    Perfect ending, Jawelik. I couldn't have done it better myself.

    Outstanding story.
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  • From Peaceguy on February 03, 2008
    cool
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