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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From SuperMutant on June 30, 2007
    Great chapter. Really hot, even in the more subtle stuff. It's a really emotionally charged dynamic too.

    I feel pretty bad for Kin though; It would be a shame if Ron and Kim's relationship were to be come too strained or less intimate.. simply because she raped him. (Well it was all in good fun right)Wwithout her where would Ron be? Or for that matter; Shego, Bonnie, or the readers?

    I'm glad to see you back online.
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  • From Kothoga on June 30, 2007
    Glad to see you online :D I have been waiting for this story to continue....and the 7th chapter was awesome....
    I can't wait for the next one and too see what happens in it
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  • From bigherb81 on June 15, 2007
    I keep reading this story hoping that one day you'll decide to eventually finish this thing. I really want to know what happens next. I mean come on it's like torture. It's like being stuck with nothing but "reality" tv to watch for all eternity. I hope you finish this story soon. Please the suspense is giving me an ulcer. Not really but it sounds good.
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  • From kyoxcatx44 on May 17, 2007
    OMG!!! Ron made Shego have a kid, lol. I love where this story is going!! Please, continue!!

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  • From bigherb81 on May 02, 2007
    Second time I've read the story and it's still good I can't wait to see how you end this thing I'm loosin sleep over this man!
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  • From SuperMutant on April 26, 2007
    Nuts. I guess this story is on permanent by now. It's damned shame, but at least it ended on something of a conclusion. Thanks for all the inspired work.
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  • From bigherb81 on April 22, 2007
    That story was sick, wrong, immoral, depraved, and extremely indecent. And I loved every word of it oh my God the fact that Ron was the slumber land sex god was priceless. I mean it starts out innocent enough w/ some curiosity and hot sex, but then it just blows up into this huge thing man and chapter 6 was hi-larious I really did not see that comin at all. You my friend are a genius if this story was a chick I would fuck it, if it were food I would rub it on the chick eat it off her and fuck her again, if it were a movie I would watch religiously and have sex w/ the story chick while watching it. Great job man can't wait for the next chapter and to see how you wrap this thing awsome just awesome.
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  • From warprince2099 on March 12, 2007
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
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  • From zardoz76 on January 31, 2007
    Fantastic story. Your writing is very entertaining and well done. Looking forward to the future chapters.
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  • From SuperMutant on January 28, 2007
    Well, presuming you still have more to tell, I'd love to see more instalments in this story.
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  • From ANON - Violent Vi on January 06, 2007
    Loved it. Please update soon. I can see Ron knock up Mrs. Dr. Possible and all the other girls Kim shared him with while forcing Kim to change the diapers without having any Ronshine. Also have him seduce the Catholic cheerleader.
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  • From ANON - RandyRondo on December 23, 2006
    Great story, please continue - I'd have Ron really lay into Kim about the consequences of her actions. He's a frekin' father! and she really did do something degrading and awful, even if if was hot and she liked it.
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  • From ANON - amy on December 20, 2006
    can you please update soon?! i've been waiting a longg time. and i love your story!
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  • From ANON - amy on December 20, 2006
    can you please update soon?! i've been waiting a longg time. and i love your story!
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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on December 14, 2006
    Come on continue the story, its no good if its not done.
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