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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From ANON - SM on September 01, 2006
    Wow, that was really good. You've got Kim's perspective in the forefront, with the epsiode plot playing out in the background, making the whole thing seem more complete as well as dropping a few more ominous hints about the plot progression.

    The scenes are quite vivid, as well as unique. Kim's dialogue, (both mental and real) and the moral ambiguity of Kim's behaviour helps make everything more intense too.

    I'd say this story is hitting all the right notes.
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  • From ANON - Elfangor on September 01, 2006
    Very good. I look forward to seeing where you take it. I'm with everyone who thinks Ron should find out but it's your story.
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on September 01, 2006
    Great chapter 2, I loved reading it. I hope that Ron does buy a Pandaroo costume to see what Kim does to him during sleeping.
    I hope also that Ron would wake up during the night and see what Kim is doing to him at night and it wasn't a dream. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - pptes on August 31, 2006
    more

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  • From ANON - D. Hebert on August 31, 2006
    Enjoyed this one! Kim getting a little on the side from Ron while he is deeply asleep, was pretty good. Maybe next time he could wake up and start some bedtime adventures with Kim. Looks like under these circumstances, Kim may not be looking far for a boyfriend...
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  • From ANON - dave on August 30, 2006
    very nice hopefullly the next chapter will be up soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    very good

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  • From ANON - Kothoga on August 30, 2006
    Great story..I hope the next one will be as good as this one. I hope that Ron will wake up one night when Kim is fucking him, and pretend to be asleep until she is done and then reveals that he was awake the whole time
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  • From ANON - Leah Phillips on August 30, 2006
    This is great, I can’t wait to read more. I’ve always like that idea of taking my boyfriend where he’s asleep, but I’ve never acted on it… yet. I hope you write more soon. Maybe you should make the next one with Kim so egger to have Ron, that she mistimed her advances, and he wakes up on her, and gives her the best fucking of her life.

    Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - bubbles on August 30, 2006
    Please add more, they have to do it with Ron awake or maybe Kim gets pregnant and has to tell Ron or Ron wakes up during the next knight.
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  • From ANON - SM on August 29, 2006
    That was quite good. Dirty and kind of cute too.
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on August 29, 2006
    Very good characterization. Look forward for more.
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  • From ANON - Horatius on August 29, 2006
    A very good beginning. Well written, good pacing. I though it was good. As I read it, I was expecting something different at the ending. but then, thats just me. I do have some minor suggestions. If you want them, email me. But all-in-all, I liked what I read.

    Now all you have to do is keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    Pretty good for a first chap. We'll see what the others look like if you continue the story
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