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By : Scienceteacher
  • From ANON - Tristan on January 16, 2017

    Why have you not continued this?  I have loved this story for the past 5 years.  I haven't checked in a year.  And now I'm back to check again.  Please come back and do more. 


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  • From AlabasterPrincess on January 02, 2011
    WOW! I have now read pretty much everything in this 'universe' you have created, and it's wonderful. Thank you for writing, and I will keep my eye out for new developments. I love it!
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  • From NineCrow on October 12, 2010
    This about My 3rd Re-Read and I'm Enjoying it as Much as the 1st!!!
    Thank You for Sharing

    I'd LOVE a Prowl Clone, Cause DoorWingers ROCK!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From AutobotHikari on August 19, 2010
    love your work, are you still taking chapter submissions?
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  • From HonorableDinobot on August 13, 2009
    Wonderful! I love the way the cones become so conflicted! Speed and TC both seemed ready to have sob fests, and it worked out so perfectly! Thank you so much for posting this!
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  • From HonorableDinobot on August 12, 2009
    (Racing partners 1)

    I love how Sped interacts with Daniel, like he models his personality, not after Daniel, but after what is most agreeable with Daniel. Brilliantly executed, dear!
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  • From HonorableDinobot on August 12, 2009
    (learning proto 2)

    I love the way you use the memory echoes. They really add to the character's, ummmm.......... uh, character! The only problem I have is that, occasionally, you'll have a moment where the transition between TC and his human's thoughts occurs, and it will take a moment or two to discern who is thinking, interrupting the flow of the story, but overall it's wonderful!
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  • From HonorableDinobot on August 12, 2009
    I've said it before and I'll say it again, BRILLIANT!!! Y'know, I wasn't going to get an account here, but then I found this series and read it, like, 80 times, and decided to get an account so I could (possibly) do a story for it, and it's your plot line than inspired me, so thank you StSE!! You are a genius! (BTW, TC is sooooo cute!!!)
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  • From HonorableDinobot on August 12, 2009
    Hey! Really awesome idea here. Is this book still open for submissions? It'll take me a long time to review all the chapters, but I'd love to do something in this book! Your plot bunny is sexy! Please let me know ASAP, and also what generations (BW, G1, G2, Bayformers, IDW, Unicron era, etc.) are allowed? Can't wait to hear from you!

    ~HDB (Honorable Dinobot)
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  • From Trelynne on July 05, 2009
    **Racing Partners - part 1**
    (Prototypes chapter 3)

    Love TC’s child like behavior! Just so sweet and cute.

    And Speed is adorable! Just 100% molestable too~ if you know what I mean~ cocky males, clones or not, are so fun to play with!

    And holy hell! I want a go kart that goes 220 mph!

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  • From Trelynne on July 05, 2009
    (Prototypes chapter 2) ***Learning***

    Sharon is love! She is smart and one hell of a cookie!

    Evil cons! Pure evil turning a profit AND also getting ready to rule the world! Evil evil evil!

    And I cant help but giggling at Sharon explaining our reason for clothes, it just makes me giggle for some reason! ^^
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  • From Trelynne on July 05, 2009
    (Prototypes chapter 1)

    Hello! I posted a review on your latest part of your third book. But you know what, i wanted to go back through this story and try to leave you a review for each chapter! Why? Hell you have me hooked and I wanted to show you just how much I appreciate your time on this story. Even thought you started this long before I was even a member I still want to take the time and write a review for you! You are not getting enough attention from the other 6700 people who have read this story so I want to show you that there are people many readers that love your work!

    First off: Daniel you are just a sexy muffin of love! Damn I wish you were real, and straight! Or at least bi man! You are such a killer person.

    I like how you took the time to add detail to the clones, and I was giggling the while time TC tried to understand Daniel, man that guy is hard on a meta~

    { “Holy shit! Tim’s a fucking genius! A fucking genius I tell you!” Daniel exclaimed as he admired the clone’s extended bonding cable. } Indeed there is a genius! And I have to say it is StSE. Soo much thought into this plot I just makes me squirm with delight!

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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 27, 2009
    Review for Prime Objective Part 8:

    Oh man! I laughed when the femmes walked in on Orion and Kylie. If I was Kyle I probably would have died of embarrassment. Personally, I enjoyed all the femmes’ comments. It’s refreshing to hear from the lady Transformers after being exposed to so much mech testosterone. Or, would it be testosterenergon? Seriously though, the girls were fun and made me laugh. And Orion’s shyness around them is more than adorable. God, I want to cuddle him!

    Oh Lord… Sunstreaker and Sideswipe teaching the Dinobots Jet Judo? …May Ratchet have mercy on their sparks.

    …When Orion gave Kylie that order, as small as it was, it was kind of… hot. Lol. I’m so easily satisfied. xD

    And, yet again, I squeed at Orion’s shyness. That was so cute how he turned away from the assembled Autobots to give them some semblance of privacy. Seriously, I love him.

    Oh my! A Starscream and an Elita clone?! Things are about to get really fun. I can’t wait to see how they all interact with one another. And, of course, any smut that comes from this will be hot beyond belief. I already can’t wait for the next chapter!

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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 10, 2009
    Well, I haven’t reviewed in a while, huh. Because it’s been too long it would be impossible for me to give a detailed review for each chapter I’ve missed (though I’ll get back to giving individual reviews right away) I’ll just review for the two story arcs that have progressed the most since my absence; Winner’s Luck and Prime Objective.

    Winner’s Luck:
    I really love how this story is coming together. I like how you twisted the idea around and ended up using the real Rumble and Frenzy instead of clones; they certainly make things much more interesting, don’t they? Haha. I really think this arc is progressing nicely; each chapter is more exciting than the last. While I love pointless smut, it was nice that you waited a bit before the naughty bits; the anticipation just made it all the more rewarding. Also, you made me fall in love with Frenzy. Dammit! xD

    Prime Objective:
    I just want to say that Orion is the cuddliest Autobot EVER. I want one. And I would give him all the hot chocolate and cuddly orange comforters he could ever want! His interactions with Juno are priceless; I love how they try to make the other jealous by giving their respective humans attention. And Orion’s shyness is so ador-a-bib-le; I squeed when he asked Elita if she would be his model. And now, if you’ll excuse me, I have to go tear Megatron apart from the inside for being such a DICK. kbye. xD

    And to all you authors whose chapters I didn’t personally review; I love you guys. Keep writing. You make me a naughty minx and I’m loving it.

    Also, STSE, thanks for encouraging everyone to be the smutty robophiles/xenophiles we are.
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  • From Pax on March 12, 2009
    0_0 Wow! That's all I can say! This has got to be your best chapter yet! And not just because of the smex ;) I enjoy the continuing of the budding relationship between Frenzy and Hope and enjoy the detail you go into regarding the cassette's through processes. I can totally understand why Frenzy wouldn't want to go back to the Decepticon base, considering they'd have a lot more freedom in a human house where they would technically be at the top of the pyramid.
    Also...
    Rumble can't kill Hope! >< Frenzy must save her! I feel bad for our heroine though, considering Rumble's low blow towards the end of the chapter. No matter how true it is.
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