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Reviews for Market Commodity

By : Scienceteacher
  • From Prizm on December 01, 2008
    This is a very interesting concept. I like it very much. Ok so I have some questions is there any charecters that are off limits and do you have to share with another in your chapter of the story? How do I add if I have something, are you going to look over them or anything like that?
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  • From ToonQueen on November 30, 2008
    The two racing chapter were awesome. X3 Man, I hope to have the time to write one of these soon!
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  • From TicTac on November 30, 2008
    Wow this is good, makes me wonder why nobody thought to do it before. It also is making me wish someone would send me a Starscream clone right about now.
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  • From ToonQueen on November 30, 2008
    Dun dun dun, I will be writing something soon. Though it might be an alternate Transformers Animated future. X3 This is awesome btw. Great idea!
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  • From Rockinmuffin on November 29, 2008
    Review for Learning:

    You managed to make TC even more adorable in this chapter than in the last. He really is just like a school boy losing his virginity, which makes it kind of appropriate that his first partner is an older woman who knows what she's doing. I love how he's so child-like and free to learn, though, really, all of the droids should be like that (to an extent) at first. I really want to see more of these two together.

    And I'm glad that Megatron's scheme was taken care of. While it had good potential for a story, I think it would've made this all a bit too thick with plot considering it's meant for people to contribute with their own robot-smut fantasy. And this way the mini decepticon clones and stay cute and cuddly forever. Teehee.

    Man, I wish I had a robot boyfriend!
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  • From Rockinmuffin on November 29, 2008
    Review for Testing Phase:

    I'm really glad you wrote this chapter because it answered a lot of questions I had about the droids, even ones I didn't address (like whether or not they came with an instruction manual). I really like it; it makes the characters seem more original and it gives the writers more freedom. Heh, funny thing; I was planning on doing my entry on Thundercracker. Great minds think alike, I guess. While I plan on doing someone else now (most likely G1 Skywarp) will authors be able to do repeats and use mechs that have already been used? I mean, I'm sure lots of girls would want to do Starscream. And if repeats are allowed then people won't have to rush in order to get a chance to do the character that they want.

    Still, this was a fun chapter. Daniel was rather funny and Sharon was so nice. She seems very maternal; kind of reminds me of a nicer version of my mom. xD And I applaud you for using an older woman; just goes to show that you don't have to be barely legal to be sexy. Still, I love how you described TC the best. You made him so precious and adorable. Gosh, I wish these things were real.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on November 29, 2008
    Thank you for your answers; they were very helpful. While I've already got an idea and have started writing it, I think it's a good idea if you post an example chapter first. There are just so little mini things I'm not quite sure about and I don't want to write something that doesn't fit with your idea. Like, I've been wondering how much intelligence and free-will the droids will have. Would they be intelligent, would like act like a more well-behaved version of the character they were designed after, do they have any more purpose or function than simply being used as a sex object, do they have personalities or are they meant to follow orders? Things like that.

    I'll continue to work on the entry I have planned, though I plan on waiting until I see an example before posting anything.
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  • From Breech_Loader on November 29, 2008
    *thinks* You know, this actually isn't a bad idea. I'd like to do a chapter for this when I have the time. It's kinda like an RP... only more sleazy than usual.

    Only trouble is that my personal mech of choice is at the moment not a Decepticon. Oh, the hell with it. I'll just write one about one of the many thousands of Starscream-fuckers out there. Because you know damn well that seekers are hot even when they're assholes. Or think of something better. Please note that I'll be working with Animated personalities - so Swindle will be pulling his "I sound like a used car salesman" stuff.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on November 29, 2008
    Heh, this is really creative. I like the idea of this story and would like to consider making an entry. I just have one question: what universde is this taking place in? I assume it's G1 because you mentioned Hook in the first chapter but I wasn't quite sure.

    Regardless, this is a very cool idea and I think it'll be fun to write an entry for it. Now I just need to decide who I want a mini clone of...

    One more question: will authors be able to submit more than one entry? Say, if someone gets a Decepticon first but then gets an Autobot later once they start selling them... Just curious.
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