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Reviews for Better Halves

By : sefiru
  • From ANON - Kyme on July 11, 2010
    I loled hard at your sectors. XDDDDDDD H1N1, R2D2, then WD40? So many lols, my man.

    And this fic is awesome. < 3
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  • From shozurei24 on January 17, 2010
    I'm glad you brought Prowl back to life. Thinking about how the show ended and how that would affect Optimus... Not fun. But now they're together again. Yay.
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  • From GabrielC on January 03, 2010
    *SQUEES A HAPPY FAN GIRLY SQUEAL!!* This was amazing!! So good, entertaining and well written and damn hot!! *files away in favourites* I will be keeping my eyes peeled for the epilogue and your next fic. Well done! XD
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  • From shozurei24 on January 03, 2010
    Mmm, great ending. *licks lips*
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  • From GabrielC on December 21, 2009
    Oh very nicely done! I was happy to find you had updated. The drawing on Starscream was classic, I was chuckling at that one. And you write the dynamic between the spark linked 'bots really well so it doesn't get confusing as to who you're referring to. Looking forward to the next update! Excellent stuff.
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  • From Raholea on December 08, 2009
    vivid imagination... yeah, let me say that while i have my moments of still trying to wrap my mind around bot sex... at least of the transformer variety... lol... i must admit you can still write some wicked smut. alas, i think i must needs to go watch some more of the new series, cause i have to fill my head wiht your descriptions, as i have faulty memory of the few episodes i have seen. (i totally suck at keeping characters straight)

    and sadly, i forgot you changed your update day, so it's tuesday... and i'm finally going.. oh yeah.. Duh. I'll catch more soon!!

    and yes... Jazz... *drools*
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  • From shozurei24 on December 07, 2009
    The sex seemed a little hastily done this time. But it was still hot!

    Snog? Really? I can't see Prime saying it.
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  • From ANON - GabrielC on December 07, 2009
    *squees* been looking forward to this story update. Nicely done very visual I must go find that cooling fan :P looking forward to the next update :)
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  • From ANON - djsaj on December 04, 2009
    :D I really like to see what the two Primes cook up for the Prowls. As for ideas, how about they tie up the two Prowls and let them pleasure each other (though without overload, maybe stopped by a toy), moving them around in different positions like facing each others interfaces or just one of them licking the other's valve/spike? After some of this 'torture', each Optimus takes 'his' respective Prowl.

    It's nice to see that you build the smut in as part of the plot and not as the "plot" itself. It isn't much in the length, but I liked that Prowl thought he didn't want Jazz to see him as a failure. You remembered it isn't "Five Servos of Doom" yet and this is what Prowl probably has felt since Yoketron's death like. Wonderful detail.
    The image of Elder Prowl smacking one fist in the other hand is just so badass - even more so as I imagine him grinning evilly. XD

    Why didn't UM told Optimus everything about his plan? And what part exactly? Though, I have a feeling it's the part with UM putting himself up as a lure and expecting to die...
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  • From Trelynne on November 23, 2009
    Love it! ^^
    Very enjoyable chapter dear, and i cant wait for the foursome~ even with the hint of P/P makes the wait even harder XP
    Thank you for the chapter!
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  • From Raholea on November 22, 2009
    they ARE acting a bit like george and fred, but since they're my favorite twins, i have no complaints!! hurrah and i will remember the new updates day. thankies and hugs!
    and good luck for RL. ^_^
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  • From GabrielC on November 22, 2009
    YAY!!! *Squeals loudly*... I love it when you update!! He he he... you have made my night as a martial artist myself I thought your sparring scenes were great had me grinning like a cheshire cat... you just gotto love Prowl's moves :D... Saw what's coming for the next chapter...'scuse me... I have to wipe up the drool... ^_^ I officially can not wait!! I would offer suggestions but well I think you do a great job so I don't want to interfere with the master at work :P
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  • From shozurei24 on November 22, 2009
    A foursome? Sweet! Can't wait to see that.
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  • From GabrielC on November 08, 2009
    oooh very nice, very nice indeed! :) I like how you've managed to fit it in to the series continuity of a sorts. Makes me sad knowing how that ended in a way, knowing what their futures really hold :(... but this is brilliant, another good chapter. Really well done. I can not wait for more! :D
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  • From shozurei24 on November 07, 2009
    All right Sunny! Way to take that jerk down a few pegs. *applauds*

    That's a pretty sneaky plan Magnus. He's a great commander.
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