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Reviews for Better Halves

By : sefiru
  • From Raholea on September 11, 2009
    as... odd, as it must be to write this.. and intriguing as it is to read, i find you still surprise me around every corner. believe me, that's a good thing. i get tired of writers who become predictable, and that is one thing you aren't. i know i haven't reviewed a lot lately, even though i've been following faithfully. just multitasking like hell.
    I wonder what an autobot's perception of human toddlers would be? i know mine can be annoying.... lol. even if i do love him dearly....
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  • From ANON - djsaj on September 10, 2009
    *snort* Tease, that you really are. UM comes with the message he will visit Earth, then wants to know where Optimus is - and it just has to Bumbleebee being the only available one in the moment. I'm curious if he will wind himself out of this or if not, how UM is going to react knowing Optimus went through a portal to another DIMENSION. I hope he won't visit G1, too, because the story's about Optimus and Prowl.
    Besides, the Seekers will pop up somewhen (will they react similarly to Optimus as they did to Prowl?) and you mentioned stasis-cuffs in the next chapter (hinted: with Prowl). You have made me giddy for the next update. XD
    Oh, not to forget - "YouenteredmeintoyoursecuritysystemasZippy?” XD, poor, poor Blurr.

    What I didn't like as much was how little detail was about the bots' reactions to young Optimus. Okay, many of them came to see him, making it look like to him he was some sort of attraction. But I miss the single, great wonder, surprise, curiousity expressed because he's their very Prime's counterpart and only that they all came tells of this.

    Optimus is a little bit snarking again - he's not as innoncent as first shown in the show and you perfectly caught that. I laughed so hard in "Decepticon Air" when he grumbled his way down the ventilation shaft (and how he cunned the Decepticons - at spark, he has just the right amount of evil XD). How do you think the others would have reacted seeing AND hearing him like this? -.^ This just showed he's a complexer character than many thought and gave him credit before.
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  • From shozurei24 on August 28, 2009
    Beast Wars - Silverbolt and BlackArachnia do make a cute couple. I can't wait for the next chapter. Stasis cuffs huh?
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  • From ANON - djsaj on August 24, 2009
    I didn't like Optimus' entrance as much as Prowl's, probably because I knew what would happen. Or maybe I missed the Seekers again commenting on a new bot, because they're bound to notice, aren't they? Will you maybe include this later? The chapters are also too short, in my opinion- you get only tidbits and then you'll wait two weeks on hot coals for the next. Okay, then I'm used to reading long chapters, so it's only a very subjective view.

    *snickers* Prowl's reaction to young Optimus was amusing - one self-sacrifing glitch is already enough, and he seems to be used to when "an" Optimus dishes out the dry humour.
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  • From Trelynne on August 18, 2009
    Cute! More please ^_^ I loved the latest chapter~ Hehe you can really see the diffraction in sparks with the two Primes.
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  • From shozurei24 on August 16, 2009
    Hey, you should have G1 Prowl interface with Young Optimus. It would only be fair.
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  • From mistressofyaoi on August 15, 2009
    I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU USED THAT STARSCREAM REFERANCE! ugh as a die hard starscream fan the actual voice actor of starscream in animated already pisses me off enough but to read it used by a fellow fanfic writter *shakes head*
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  • From shozurei24 on August 14, 2009
    Young Optimus is too curious for his own good. But meeting Prime should help his self-esteem. Has anyone else noticed that it's a little on the low side?
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  • From ANON - FuneralRoses on August 13, 2009
    SWEET!! This is an excellent fic! Just the plot itself is awesome! Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - blue on August 06, 2009
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Opitmus reacts to G1!
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  • From Trelynne on July 31, 2009
    Cuute! i hope there is more i cant wait to see how this prime turns out~
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  • From shozurei24 on July 30, 2009
    You brought Blurr back to life, yay! Prowl's stalking Optimus? LOL.
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  • From Supermoi on July 19, 2009
    Indeed Prowl must have some mischief in mind! I would too! XDD Waiting to read more!
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  • From ANON - blue on July 19, 2009
    Prowl is way to funny! I can't wait to see what he and Optimus get up to!
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  • From ANON - Bro on July 17, 2009
    Simply Awesome. I love it and can't wait to read more!
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