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Reviews for What's wrong with me?By : ItwasMerlin |
- From AhsokasTrueLove on January 15, 2017
A very promising start. I'm really looking forward to where this goes. I agree with SailorNemesis in that it will help immersion if Astrid and Mildew are realistic in their representation...she should def have a pretty nice sized bush at her age. In my opinion it wouldnt be bad to take it a step further and dont shy away from how unappealing Mildew is. Certainly for me, and I assume anyone else who likes this type of story, a lot of the excitement of it is a pretty girl like Astrid submitting to someone waaay below her league so dont be afraid to draw emphasis on this ugly old man corrupting a sexy teenager.
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- From ANON - on January 15, 2017
Hope he fucks astrid hard until she's begging for more
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- From ninesenshi on January 13, 2017
Promising start, hope to read more soon. Also, please dont shave all her body hair like some modern girl. Thanks.
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- From Lunarsilver on January 13, 2017
It's a good setup of what's to "come" and not just mildew lol
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- From ANON - on January 13, 2017
What a strange pairing . I'm not sure I should like it but the idea is kind of hot in a wrong way . You have got my attention please do continue
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