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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From ANON - Kothoga on September 12, 2006
    Great chapter 4. I hope you will soon that Ron will wake up during the "sleepover". Keep up the good work man
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  • From ANON - Sickly on September 12, 2006
    It's alright. There's a whole of lot of action but it tends to get repititive when there's sex in every chapter. I'm hoping Ron will realise what's going on and then when he and Kim have sex while he is awake, he turns out to be a total let down. XD

    That'll be good. It would be also be nice if Kim had more feelings than just horniness ¬¬

    But yeah. I enjoyed it, keep it up.

    Peace. Keep It Sick.

    Sickly.
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  • From Skullxeon on September 12, 2006
    lol... Ron got kidnapped and used for four days? lol...damn... seems like Shego was happy in the end. Too bad for Draken get beaten stupid... lol.... i feel bad for him. eh... not really, he doesn't deserve it...lol... adios for now ... and hope you update soon... its a funny read... Adios...
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  • From ANON - SM on September 11, 2006
    You have gift for keeping things interesting.
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  • From Jayrich on September 10, 2006
    WELL DONE, MAN!!!

    This is easily one of the best KP stories I've ever read, and easily blows my Chapters out of the water. You got the dialouge and mannerisms down to a 'T', and made it just like I was watching the show. The only small problem I had with it was too little dialouge. But for how the story was set up, it really didn't matter. Hope you do more KP stories, man. It really showcases your talent. Thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - Skullxeon on September 09, 2006
    funny... lol.. its funny to see that ron still hasn't realized anything's wrong.. :) lol.... catcha when you update.... lol... adios...
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  • From ANON - Leah Phillips on September 09, 2006
    This story is getting better and better, now that you've introduced my favourite character into the fray. But I’ve got to ask this. WHEN THE HELL IS RON GOING TO WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SM on September 09, 2006
    I guess the Ron turning evil and any potnetial complications it would have presented has been glossed over, (Though I have to admit I was temporarily thrown by the line which perhaps accidentally implied that Ron spent himself and not the night in the villain's lair ;)) but I really liked the examination of Kim's descent into depravity. Letting Ron convince her parents of her innocent intentions, the sometimes forceful way she gets Ron into the sack, and willingness to share... all great. You even had me fooled with Shego's Dr D trick. It's all really good, and not just because you've written some intense action.
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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on September 08, 2006
    Ron is the luckiest basterd in the world and he dosn't even know it. I wonder why he never suspects anithing, wish he would fake being asleep and wait to see what happends. Love to see Kim's reaction to that. Anyway, good chapter can't wait for 4. Later :)
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on September 08, 2006
    Great work on chapter 3. can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - pud on September 06, 2006
    more very good
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  • From ANON - Canis on September 06, 2006
    Wow I need a cold shower after reading that. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - THE MAYOR on September 05, 2006
    Wow !! Great story !! I'm glad you didn't have Ron wake up. I like that he has no clue that Kim is having sex with him while he sleeps. I think you should make sleeping with Ron a little more of challenge for Kim. Mr.P could get upset that Ron is sleeping in the same room as his sweet Kimberly, and makes Ron sleep downstairs on the couch or something. Then Kim would have to find a way to sleep with Ron without waking up the whole house. Thats just one idea. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - random review leaving girl on September 04, 2006
    It's kinda wierd because I keep feeling like Kim is raping Ron (which, I guess she technically is) but it made me feel a lot better when he was knew what was going on (even if he thinks it's a dream!) Anyway, pseudo-rape aside it's an awesome little fic and I'm glad you didn't have him figure out what was actually happening!
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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on September 03, 2006
    Hi,
    I must say that this is one good story. I love how you bild up to the "climax" of the event and cool off with Ron wondering why he was felling so good without the mess. I do hope he figures it out not just wake up, I mean he could be in the caffateria where he realises (in chapters yet to "cum") what Kim's bin doing and wants to get even.

    P.S.sorry for the bad puns and there is a nice pic of Ron and Kim at www. Sirkowski.com, its in the 2006 gallery, hope you like! ;) Later
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