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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From ANON - Leah Phillips on October 24, 2006
    This story keeps getting better and better, I can not wait to read more, and i'm really glad the Shego was Ron's first time awake. Also i think Ron should give Kim a taste of what it's like to be forced. Maybe agree to fuck her, give her one hell of a power fucking, then leave her on the edge, frustrated and battered. I think that would be brillent revenge for poor O'l Ron.

    Hope you update soon. Good Luck
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  • From ANON - SM on October 23, 2006
    That was a different, but good chapter. I was admittedly surprised, but pleased, that this chpater wasn't a conclusion. Ron's reaction, Shego's threat, and the clever twist at the end put the story on something of a more serious note, while Ron's multiple disappontments made the chapter funny too.

    I like Kim's initial reaction to Ron's unexpected relevation, as well as the girls' nochalant attitudes. I also like the continuity displayed when Shego wanted Ron to say her name. (As opposed to Kim's like he used to)
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  • From ANON - dbfox007 on October 23, 2006
    Now this is getting good!! Very hot stuff!!! Keep on writing!!!
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on October 23, 2006
    Reading that last paragraph, two words kept repeating itself in my head:

    'Oh Shit...Oh Shit...Oh Shit...Oh Shit...'

    Ron's a daddy?! And not only that but with a wanted felon. A world-class villian! With arrest warrants in over 11 countries!! OMG!!!

    And as far as Ron finding out whom Kim shared her boytoy with: priceless. Especially to go from Bonnie, to just about the entire cheersquad, to Monique (his most trusted friend, outside Kim) to Mrs. Possible!!!

    I would have liked to have had a Tara incident myself only because her character seems so sweet and innocent. Would have been quiet the shock to poor Ronnie.

    And I actually agree with his view. Sure its every male's fantasy to have multiple sex partners. And Come On, just about all of us want to screw the cheerleaders at one time or another: if nothing else than just to shut them up. But he didn't even get to enjoy it for christ sacks. He was a man-whore without the enjoyment of being one! Now granted surprised me how long it took him to say "Fuck it" and just enjoy himself. But I can understand that as a side effect of the shock of finding out just how many people Kim shared him with. I mean come on! Surprised he didn't faint.

    Eagerly awaiting his reaction to finding out he's a father. How's he gonna support her? Naco Royalties anyone ;). Also I think the best way to get revenge on Kimbo is to leave her out of his circle for a while. Sex withdrawel :) Oh man she'll be at his feet, begging and pleading for forgiveness in no time flat. Which given her stubborn nature would be reward enough for me.

    Eagerly awaiting more, this shit rocks!


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  • From ANON - dave on October 23, 2006
    Ron's ungrateful ass was sounding gay complaining about all of the sex he was getting thanks to kim. Kim should snatch him like shego did point out he would have said no if he was away and fuck his brains out while he is awake.
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on October 23, 2006
    awesome work on the 6th chapter, I hope Ron (maybe with the help of Shego) to get his revenge on Kim
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2006
    Too bad you didn't bring in Monique to enjoy the party. She'd probably love to lose her cherry to Ron.
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  • From ANON - Demos on October 09, 2006
    Very nice. I look forward to hearing more stories from this series. Kim's nature seems spot on with her agressive manner imo.
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on October 09, 2006
    Damn, is it hot in here or just this smut...

    I've gotta say nice job other than the fact that while this is a great smut tale, I've pretty much deleted Ron and Kim from the story. Because they're not in these characters just their names are. If I don't think that way I get pissed because Kim's using Ron as a sex toy and once she gets bored with him its out with the used dildo he goes. And I don't like that thought.

    Since your walking down the proverbial street are we gonna see Monique, Mrs. Dr. P, Zita, Dr. Director, the rest of the cheer squad, etc start getting in on the Ron action. Or is Ron finally gonna wake up?? I have no problem with you extending this story but I'd really like you to have him wake up...


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  • From ANON - SM on October 08, 2006
    I can't help but think that Kim is a little too sure of her ability to smooth over things with Ron hen he wakes up...
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on October 08, 2006
    Awesome work on the chapter 5, I'm waiting for the next one. Keep 'em coming and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - bloodrain01 on October 08, 2006
    i real what to know wat rons gona do when he find out
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on September 29, 2006
    OMG you evil, a great writer but just plain evil (grins)! Please tell me you're planning on finishing what you started and have Ron-man either wake up during or find out after what happening.. He won't mind, hell if he's as good asleep as you've shown, bet he blows them both out of their mind awake.
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  • From ANON - jared on September 20, 2006
    heh, one of the best KP fanfics ive ever read, keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Dorian on September 14, 2006
    Bloody fantastic.
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