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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From ANON - Pat Squared on December 11, 2006
    So one down and half of Middleton High to go. So how many girls are going to get knocked up before you finish this tale. I could see the Barefoot and Pregnant Club of Middleton High grow exponentially. Maybe Ron decides to give all the girls private interactive lessons about the birds and the bees. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Black Whole on November 23, 2006
    Heh, awsome. The story is really great, and I think you should keep going. I was a bit surprised to hear Shego got pregnant off of Ron. I love your story, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - frank on November 22, 2006
    wow
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  • From ANON - astria on November 09, 2006
    Ha! I knew all that unprotected ron sex would result in pregnancy I knew it! reading all those other chapters I was thinking, damn hes gunna have alot of illigitamet children! Im in favor of him staying with she-go for the munchkins sake and totally pissing off kim! Hey it dosent have to be love, actually that would probably make the shego-ron thing more interesting.

    hoping to see more soon
    astria
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  • From ANON - Master on November 09, 2006
    I respect you human.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2006
    Good so far
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  • From ANON - Dutchman on November 02, 2006
    Who would have thunk it? Out of all those girls only Shego gets preg. Sounds to me like Ron has his ultimate revenge already. Kim is sure to want one when she finds out Shego has Ron's kid. Will he give in or hold his ground?
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 31, 2006
    I love the way Ron got some of his payback, and finding out that Ron is the father of Shego's baby will make Kim regrett from ever sharing Ron agian. (UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!)
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  • From ANON - link is so cool on October 30, 2006
    i have a few words to describe this so far DAM BITCHIN AND HOLY HELL
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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on October 30, 2006
    Hey, Nice chapter. I love that Ron did not just give in to the women and made each one suffer a bit. It just felt right, but man that news when he was with Shego was surprising. I would call it the ultimate payback to Kim and the rest, but hows Ron going to deal with it? Anyway Great chapter Later:)
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  • From ANON - Shardae on October 29, 2006
    Damn.... Thats fucked up. Now cuz of Kim's dumb ass Ron's got a kid... Juss because Kim couldn't say no to the dick... LoL. Add soon
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  • From ANON - brian on October 27, 2006
    just finished this story. i have to say, it is fantastic!
    the story is great, it just flows, seeing ron act the way he did, and wanting revenge, really makes we want to see what is going to happen.
    and wow, that twist at the end, simply spectacular, please finish this soon, it is so good!
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  • From ANON - Darklord2099 on October 26, 2006
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
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  • From ANON - Rick on October 25, 2006
    He gets hard ons dreamin of Kim, when he cums he screams out kims name no mater who is makinghim cum.

    If he was awake he would have wussed out of taking care of Kim's horniness using the it would effect their friendship excuse.

    Well maybe in the end Ron's revenge is having Kim go thru withdrawals for a week or so then give her the screwing of her life
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  • From ANON - Bonniefan on October 24, 2006
    Oh man, Kim went so beyond wrong! And now that Ron knows, I hope he cuts her off while having fun with everyone else. Of course, the baby with Shego might hamper that thought for the future.
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