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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From bigherb81 on August 09, 2007
    Great job on the new chapter really liked the shower scene. Especially the closet dom, oh and its a masochist that enjoys pain a sadist likes to dish it out. Can't wait to see how you wrap the story though it's been a long time coming and I am pretty anxious.
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  • From flyer23 on August 08, 2007
    HOLY CRAP!!This story blows you a way.First you make it from a oneshot chapter to a great story.Then the sex scent were out of this world.Kim acting like a dog in heat obey her masters wanting ron forgivens.Shego having his baby and retired from villaining with her child.All cheerleading squad in the shower room kick ass.Alone one thing surprise me the most was jess fetish for a virgin.Hell even mrs.possible got in to it.

    (.P.S.I'm sorry to see it come to a end.But all good thing..oh' you known the rest.It would be nice for sequal.)
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  • From on August 07, 2007
    i was kind of hoping that Kim got some from Ron in the end :)

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  • From Kothoga on August 07, 2007
    Awesome work Jawelik...nice work on the 8th chapter...but I found an error....when Ron is gonna do Hope anally you wrote "I ever taken a girl up the ass?" when it should be "Have I ever taken a girl up the ass?" other than that it's fine.... pure gold this story is :D

    Can't wait for the next chapter...although it will be the last one, but I hope you are gonna do some sort of sequel to this...

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  • From darkecofreak23 on July 15, 2007
    Well, we've certainly gone beyond OOC now. It's amazing what a sex addiction will do to some people. So, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you update soon, but there's no rush. I'm used to people taking a while. I'm a betareader for Classic Cowboy, after all.
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  • From darkecofreak23 on July 15, 2007
    Naturally, Shego has a kid by Ron. Never thought I'd see that. So, now the boy knows he's got a harem of all the named girls in Middleton. What will he do now?
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  • From darkecofreak23 on July 15, 2007
    Still great. Very natural progression. I'm looking forward to seeing if Zorpox is as deep a sleeper as Ron.
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  • From darkecofreak23 on July 15, 2007
    It was a good story, nothing over the edge or OOC. Ron probably could sleep through something like that, multiple times.
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  • From zardoz76 on July 05, 2007
    Deepsleeper was one of the first stories that I read here. I have to say that it is THE BEST also. Great story and glad that you could make it back to finish it.
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  • From MDR on July 03, 2007
    Nice chapter! but don't forget that Kim is not the only guilty party here. Every single girl that used him (The Cheer Squard, Monique, Yori, Bonnie, etc.), every single 'friend' that used him is guilty and should be punished.
    If you are open to a suggestion, how about this. Have Ron screw each of them. Give each girl several days of just alone-time with Ron. Have him screw them so completely that they would never feel satisfied with another man again. Masterbation, boyfriends, one-night flings, none of them can compare, and as such torments them. Eventually, after they realize fully what they had done, he can come back into their lives and make them happy again (this would of course become a Ron/Harem fic), though chastised.
    Just a thought.


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  • From MDR on July 03, 2007
    Hmmmm, very interesting story. A couple things I would like to point out though, before reading the next chapter. What Kim was doing, in regards to the acupressure thing, was essentially date-rape. She might as well have been slipping roofies into his drink. And as such, is no better than a man doing the same to an unsuspecting girl. She should think about that, and feel remorse. It seems that over the past year Ron stopped being her friend, and became a mere blowup doll. From all appearences, her desire to have sex with him overrode any friendship they had.
    Ron had a very good point when he said that she took his first time away from him, and even took away any memories of living his every erotic dream. I just don't know how she can repay that sort of thing. Its not like he can just have sex with her while she is asleep...she would probably like it, and would definately know it was happening. The only way I can see this realistically having a 'happy' ending is if Kim and Monique (his two friends) honestly came to regret what they did.
    Anyways, this has been a very intersting story, and I look forward to reading the rest!

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  • From warprince2099 on July 03, 2007
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(what about the other girls like Yori, Monique and Tara? also is this going to be a Ron/Harem Fanfic?
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  • From bigherb81 on July 01, 2007
    Thank you so much for getting that whole bill thing taken care of. A little extreme cutting it off for non pay though. Good to see that you havent lost your touch though. This chapter was definately well worth the wait. Nothing like a little punishment fitting the crime. Can't wait for the upcoming chapters and welcome back.
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  • From Bonniefan on July 01, 2007
    Ahh, that was perfectly done. I'm definitely anxious to see more of Kim's punishment, especially as he starts to seriously make the rounds through school.

    Eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on July 01, 2007
    Great story I would of thought nothing better than that... I hope you make a update soon it was a good story.. Hope to see a update soon and please keep up the great chapters..
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