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Reviews for Deep Sleeper

By : Jawelik
  • From bigherb81 on February 01, 2008
    Man well worth the wait my friend you did the story justice with that ending. After that ending I feel better I mean nice build up and lead in. Liked the scene with her mom too. I always did have a thing for the older ladies something about experience that's a real turn on. Really wished there was a Monique scene in there too though, but as you said that's what sequels are for so can't wait for the next instalment. And congrats on being gainfully employed.
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  • From rrede18 on January 29, 2008
    lol Absolutely loved it! I like this side of KP. Love the story plot. Can't wait to continue reading. What made you come up with this idea? ~Rrede18
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  • From darkecofreak23 on January 29, 2008
    Well, I wasn't a big fan of the middle of the story, but the ending was just what I hoped.
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  • From dave69812 on January 28, 2008
    A nice conclusion to one of my favorite stories.

    Hope to see the sequeals soon.

    theotherdave
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  • From nczuma on January 26, 2008
    Wow, I've been waiting for the conclusion for so long to this story and it was amazing!

    I particularly liked that they got together in the end; it seemed in the previous chapter like the story might end with Kim never getting forgiven which would've been a downer, even in a sex story. Ron getting blown away by Kim's skill was nice and that phone call from Bonnie was a hilarious idea.

    Great writing man :)
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  • From bigherb81 on December 01, 2007
    Like the third time I've read this and as I read it I noticed something and was thinking about a few things. What I did notice was that Kim never actually apologized or truly felt bad about the incident after Ron found out. She didn't even give him the courtesy of feeling slightly ashamed. What I was thinking about is are you gonna have Ron fuck Monique and Mrs. Dr. P before the story ends they're a couple of my favorite female characters in these type of stories. Would really like to see that. Next what happened in that year before Ron found out, was it just the cheerleaders, and what was it like with the other girls especially Monique, Yori, and her mom. Finally what is the last sex scene going to be I was really curious about that can't wait for it.
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  • From WritersBlock81 on November 14, 2007
    Very good. not much to say beyond that. your description of Kim has given me a lot of inspiration for my own stories. I do, however, find it rather dissapointing that Monique isn't in on the punishment. I'm pretty certain that she would love getting in on the action and she was one of the few who didn't even try to lie to Ron after he found out.
    Just a thought. after all it is your storie and I love it.
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  • From Horatius314 on October 10, 2007
    I'll say it again. This chapter is good. Good pacing, good content, good sex. Just plain all-around good. I know what I'd like to see in the final chapter, but then I"ve always been a romantic at heart. I caught one typo that we both missed, and even the spell-checker missed.

    I'm looking forward to the climax (pun) and resolution of this one.
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  • From CANDICEANDTORRIE on September 18, 2007
    plase write more!
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  • From tramblie on September 06, 2007
    omfg this is one if not the best KxR ever plz keep me updated on anything u write. plz u r such an amazing smut writer plz email me on anything u wight my email is tramblie0@gmail.com
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  • From CANDICEANDTORRIE on September 03, 2007
    omg that was f-ing hot! plz plz write more!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 28, 2007
    Excellent work dude, I hope Monique and Kim's mom will be in the conclusion of the story. So that Ron can have some 'salt and pepper' on his speacial order of Kim Possibilities. Ghostpen69: I like my ghostikins idea, but I can't wait for your next chapter. So please keep up the fantastic work.
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  • From SuperMutant on August 14, 2007
    Great to see this story back. I really like your style. (Though I'll admit I like the pre-waking chapters better for the concept) I'm sure I'll love the conclusion, but I'm hoping for Shego to make another appearance. (As well as the big Kim/Ron moment Kim has been hoping for) I also hope you plan on writing more afterwards.
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  • From MDR on August 14, 2007
    Very nice chapter! The only thing I would say is missing is the fact that Kim is not the only 'villian' here. Bonnie, the cheer team, etc. are all just as guilty. Kim's crime is particularly bad since he trusted her so much, but that doesn't change the fact that the others committed the same crimes.
    Heh, if anal sex is the only 'first' that Ron can remember and claim as his own, I suspect Kim better watch her backside. That sort of thing can easily turn to a fetish. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2007
    When I read 'conclusion' I actually yelled 'Noooo!' outloud. Great chap yet again. The last one better be a long one! I know I'm hoping to see Kim and Ron finally get together (they'll have to get over the fact that they hurt eachother. Personally I'm hoping for a little romance between the two, since all the other scenes have been no-hesitation-get-straight-to-it sex. Not that I'm complaining though - I LOVED every scene you wrote).
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