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Reviews for Better Halves

By : sefiru
  • From shozurei24 on July 17, 2009
    This is really good. What did Prowl do with that marker? Don't tell me he tagged the inside of Prime's trailer?!
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  • From ANON - blue on July 12, 2009
    Way to hot! The seekers are way to funny! Great job!
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  • From Supermoi on July 06, 2009
    Yay for hot Robotsex!! *nosebleed*
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 03, 2009
    OOOOOOOHhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Prime is awesome! I think that having the difference between the two worlds is really cool...with the Prime of Prowls world not as settled and a bit young. This story is so great! Thank you.
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  • From Raholea on July 03, 2009
    My mind.. kept trying to picture that. and while it's generally successful, i still find it a bit.. odd. lol
    but hey, it's still a great story, and while i find the smut mildly amusing to my brain (due to the annalysis factor) i am enjoying it. i'll keep up on the reading!
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  • From shozurei24 on June 21, 2009
    The Seekers may be coarse, but you can't deny that they have good taste. Sunny's pranks seem to be focused on denting Prowl. Jealously maybe?
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  • From Raholea on June 20, 2009
    *chuckles*
    i am liking this more and more as i read. and seriously, i want to piece all the parts together, but, since i don't have the time to keep up with ANY of the episodes for either sighted series, i get to chuckle and make pieces fit as you write. and since you're providing enough details for me to work with, that's a great thing. thanks.

    now, for the insane mind to wonder how you work in smut, and 'bots... though i will quietly wait until you get there.... lol.

    Sincerely waiting for the next chapter, Shadow Wolf
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 19, 2009
    OOOOHhhhhh, I just found this story and I really like it. I like how you have the two Prowls...that is so cool. Thank you for a great read and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - shozurei on June 06, 2009
    Prowl and Optimus huh? I never thought about that pairing before. I usually put Prowl with Jazz, Bumblebee, or Lockdown.
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  • From Supermoi on June 01, 2009
    That was awesome! Please update soon! I'm dying to read what'll hapens next!
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  • From ANON - shozurei on May 26, 2009
    This is really good. Prowl from TFA getting sucked into the G1 world. Cool. I hope you add more to this.
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  • From Raholea on May 23, 2009
    It's a start... *scratches head* since i'm not utterly familiar with Transformers beyond the newer stuff, can you refresh my brain over which series you're overlapping? Please? just so i can ask my hubby questions if I get lost, cause he knows all the old stuff....

    Though i'm waiting to see what you do to starscream, i always wanted to slice that one in turn him into scrap. ^^
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  • From Scienceteacher on May 23, 2009
    Interesting concept and your writing has improved. But you still need to grammar check a few more times before publishing. There's some dialogue which doesn't have the ending "" to differentiate it between non-dialogue, and a few mispelling's. But all-in-all, you're much improved!
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