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Reviews for Late Night Home

By : Bonniefan
  • From darkecofreak23 on July 13, 2007
    Who says adult fanfiction has to be all sex? This was a great second chapter. You could post it at ff.net, if it weren't for the adult situations.
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  • From darkecofreak23 on July 13, 2007
    An interesting take. I'll admit I skipped a lot, but I plan to go back and read it now that I know the sitch is mutual for Kim and Ron.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on July 12, 2007
    Great story. I liked how you made the flow of the story change yet remain very "interesting". Keep up the great work.

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  • From Jarkota on July 12, 2007
    Another great chapter. Isn't it amazing how these little one-off fics can end up becoming entire series?
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  • From Kothoga on July 12, 2007
    Awesome chapter mate...I can't wait for the next chapter :D
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  • From jupmod on June 14, 2007
    Hi Zar! :)

    Yeah, the possibilities are endless with swing groups. If Kim and Ron are open with each other and don't mind threesomes and such, I think a three-way with Yori would be a good idea, especially given their history together. ;)
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  • From johnrie18 on June 13, 2007
    Buddy, go for it! This was a great piece of work, I say go all the way with it. Do whatever you want. Oh, and when are you going to update your other story here on aff.net? Been keeping me waiting for too long.
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  • From Michael64 on June 10, 2007
    Woof! That was really kinda cool. Yeah, still using my alternative name here. Two pairings I would like to read are Ron/Monique, and then Kim/Dex (From the Oh Boys). Hey, Kim did say one time, "I Love Dex!" I STILL need to work on that Fearless Ferrett story here. It's been stewing in the back of my mind...
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  • From GhostWhiter on June 10, 2007
    Great stuff--you're right, the possibilities are nearly endless. So don't leave your readers hanging like Ron did to Bonnie.

    Any chance we might see the green lady get in on the action? If so, please don't pair her with Drakken, the wimp can't stand up to his mother let alone go toe-to-toe with Shego.
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  • From bigherb81 on June 09, 2007
    Now that is what I call a twist in a story. I actually thought that Ron was pissed at Kim for cheating on him. But then BAM out of nowhere you come back with swingers. You are so right too the possibilities are endless I mean you can even get Kims mom and Shego in on the action. Man kudos to you my friend kudos!
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  • From rcwilliams on June 09, 2007
    Nice to see you back here again Zaratan... Good chapter you have.. really would like to see what happens between Kim, Ron, and Bonnie. I have a request for a Ron/Tara/Bonnie chapter... when will you update "Going Beyond Bonding"
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  • From zardoz76 on June 09, 2007
    Awesome story. I always likes the Ron/Kim/Bonnie stories.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on June 08, 2007
    HOLY JALAPENO! That was something I was not expecting. Please multi chapter this thing! I would love to know what they did to 'Bon-Bon'. So please make more.

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  • From Jarkota on June 08, 2007
    At first, I didn't want to read because of the Josh thing (if you can't tell, I hate him with pretty much every fiber of my being), but, like you, I can see the potential here. Wouldn't mind seeing more of this one at all.
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