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Reviews for Late Night Home

By : Bonniefan
  • From johnrie18 on June 04, 2008
    I didn't really know what to say about these last couple chapters other than great job. But still, more than anything else, I love the way you captured Kim's point of view when she is in her 'lust mode' or whatever else you want to call it. It really is entrancing.

    Looking forward to this next chapter. It will be interesting to see just what you have planned outside of the usual 'sex chapters.'

    Great job and keep it up. Still hoping to see an update for either "Going Beyond Bonding" or "Valentine's Surprise." Until then, good luck to you.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on June 02, 2008
    Dude.... I LOVED IT!!! There just isn't enough good Ron/Mon sex scenes or stories but THIS ONE IS THE BEST SO FAR!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and yes I do like your story chapters as well as your "hot" chapters... Great work Z, Bravo, Bravo...
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  • From Kothoga on June 02, 2008
    Yum Yum...this one juicy chapter...I cant wait for the next part where Ron helps Tara with her "problem", I´m really wondering who will be the master between those two :D
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  • From johnrie18 on May 30, 2008
    Yeah, I'm totally enjoying the non-step sex for now. So keep it up. And by all means, update again soon.

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  • From GhostwriterMO on May 29, 2008
    Whoa!!! Josh is a lot more excitible then I thought! And it looks like Monique and Felix have picked a good place to move to after all! I can't wait for the next 2 chapters
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  • From Kothoga on May 29, 2008
    this story keeps getting better and better :O I can't wait for the next part where Monique gets to try the Ron-Sausage :D
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  • From darkecofreak23 on May 17, 2008
    You play the sex so well around the story that's it's hard to remember this is supposed to be porn. Just a few things, though. Minor stuff like forgotten articles, a few forgotten verbs.
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  • From johnrie18 on May 17, 2008
    Wow. I just...wow. I don't really know what else to say to this chapter than just...wow.

    I'm at a loss for words sir. Bravo. Truely, well done.
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  • From panda0031698 on May 15, 2008
    i realy love this story.
    what i love is that it is not just sex sex sex there is a plot which keeps me interested.
    i also love the idea of ron as a dom.

    p.s there are 3 ladies i would love to see ron with and they are yori, Dr Director and Mrs Dr P if at all possable.


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  • From darkecofreak23 on May 12, 2008
    You are, without a doubt, the best writer on this site. Kim taking three guys and Bonnie, never would've seen that coming. I don't know if I've said this already, but this Nympho Kim is... what's the word... engaging? I just love to see her when she cuts loose.
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  • From TheGriffin on May 07, 2008
    Incredible story, well written *applause*
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  • From classiccowboy on May 05, 2008
    Hardcore doesn't begin to cover it, my friend. this just keeps getting hotter. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Ffourteen on May 05, 2008
    Another fun addition to the story, I can't wait to see who wins the game.
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  • From deruam on May 05, 2008
    I'm a new fan of your story.I love all the chacraters in this story.From Kim,Ron,Bonnie,Shego,Tara,Josh,Hope,Fexil,Monique,Joss,Wade and the new ones.

    So Wade and Joss are not into group swiping too much.I figure Ron and Wade where not Bi.So Kim is Bi but not her cousin.And they say there not into incest.But Kim made a comment about Joss buns when she was leaving.I don't know about that.One day you are going have to do a chapter with the Loads and Stoppables.Why do Joss last name Possible-Loade?Then just her husband last name?

    And I can't get enough off Bonnie and Shego.Shego is mostly into Kim and Bonnie is slow falling for with Ron.Shego was there at the being of Kim and Ron sexslave drug nightmare.So Shego understand her almost much as Ron do.And Ron was Bonnie knight and shinning armor after Brick cruelity.That most of been rough for Kim parents to see their only daughter infect by the drug like that.

    Now final you added Monique into the swingers party.I like her spice and forward ways about people.The why she reacted about Shego and Bonnie.She still didn't believe Kim and Ron about them been change people.She is going have too spin some personal time with Shego and Bonnie.It's going be interest to see two dom Monique and Ron do.Sound like Monique still think Ron is that same submits teenage boy.I wonder who will win and call the othere Master or Misters?

    Thank for the story.
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  • From johnrie18 on May 05, 2008
    Non-stop fun for the next few chapter huh?

    Well then, 'nuff said. Hury up with the next few chapters!

    Still as awesome a story as ever.
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