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Reviews for Late Night Home

By : Bonniefan
  • From Kothoga on May 05, 2008
    I Love this story...and I can't wait for the future chapters with all of the hot action :D I hope Monique gets to try Ron's sausage like she wants :D
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  • From GhostwriterMO on May 05, 2008
    DUDE... I can't wait for the party to really get started! Hey one question; has Kim and Ron shared with Joss and Wade? (Ron/Joss and Kim/Wade?) And if so, are you going to tell us about it? cause this is one of your best stories Z. Keep up the great work as always.
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  • From darkecofreak23 on April 30, 2008
    "Her and tara knew the menu inside and out." - She and Tara knew the menu inside and out.

    "...monogamous to they're group..." - You meant their, of course.

    Oh, the innuendo never ends, but that's what makes it fun, especially with a good author.

    At least you didn't misspell gaping. I can't tell you how many times I've seen gapping staring me in the face. And I did have to chuckle when I read Kim and Ron's restaurant revenge lines. "Master, she is being quite presumptuous." I love that line.
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  • From darkecofreak23 on April 30, 2008
    "...more content to splash each other than join in with the girls." I was about to thank you for knowing the difference between then and than, but then I saw this: “Much better then we ever did when we were younger.”

    “I was rooming with Hope at the time, since Josh and I couldn't afford our own place at the time..." You seem to recently have developed a problem with repeating yourself and redundancy, too. "Kim just sat back disgusted, arms crossed across her chest." If her arms are crossed, then it is obvious they are in front of her.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on April 28, 2008
    ACK!!!.... PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF SANITY!!! Dude do you have to tease with the chapter? I can't wait for the Ron and Monique, (Bonbon or Kimmie?)scene! You seriously have my blood pumping for your next chapters! You do such great work on both FF sites. For what was suppose to be a one-shot it just keeps getting better so keep it up. P. S. please update soon!
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  • From Ffourteen on April 27, 2008
    This is shaping up to be my favorite fanfic for this series. I really hope you keep adding to it.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on April 27, 2008
    BO...OY....AH!!! Incredible chapter as always Z. I loved the Tweebs spiking her cereal trick sounds something that they would do. PLEASE in the name of heaven and for sanity's sake, UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From Ffourteen on March 02, 2008
    This was really interesting, started off kinky, then got really dark, then swung back to kinky. It seems like you have a firm idea of where you are going with it and I can not wait to see more.
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  • From flyer23 on February 12, 2008
    It's good to see you back into the swang of your story.
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  • From bigherb81 on February 07, 2008
    Great job and thanks for the double droppage with the two new chapters. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the Mankeys got into the whole swing scene.
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  • From johnrie18 on February 06, 2008
    Hooray, update! It's about time. And naturally, this update does not disappoint.

    Now enough with the reviews already, let's have another! Come on, chop chop.
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  • From Kothoga on February 06, 2008
    Awesome chapter mate, too bad there wasn't any anal in it but hey, it's no worry as I bet you will have it in another part of the story..I will be waiting for the next one with the pool party :D

    and btw...Kim's mom officially has a name now...Ann(e)
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  • From GhostwriterMO on February 05, 2008
    I award you the GOLDEN FANNIE for the most badical Kim and Shego chapter of this month. So now ROn gets to play...sigh some guys get all the luck (and Mystical Monkey Power). Like before I can't wait for more and I love your story ideas so please get to work for your fan base (insert Puppy Dog Pout).
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  • From Kothoga on February 05, 2008
    Been waiting for the continuation of this story from you :D and I really liked this new chapter....too bad Ron ruined Shego's plan...I bet Kim was getting close to saying the word Shego wanted her to say before Ron showed up...

    Will be waiting for the next chapter :D
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  • From johnrie18 on October 22, 2007
    About chaper 4, I have to admit, the notion of Ron bloodly murdering the guy that did this to Kim was not as satisfying as one might expect. The guy totally had it coming, but still, it shouldn't have been Ron. I can totally see Shego telling Ron to take Kim and go. Have Shego do the deed and then all would be well.

    Still, solid story. Only, you never told us what horrible, fate awaited that govenor that sold out Kim. We want him to get it and baaad.
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