The Secret Goings On of the Xiaolin Temple | By : kingston Category: +S through Z > Xiaolin Showdown Views: 8523 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Xiaolin Showdown, which is property of WB and the creation of Christy Hui and others. I do not make any money from these writings. |
Its finally arrived. I'm sorry that I mis-estimated the arrival of this chapter so much, but I hit a huge narrative wall. This is my first ever yaio/ M/M; I hope it's up to your standards. As always, please review: both encouragement, constructive criticism and suggestions for both this ad my other stories are welcomed and encouraged. Please enjoy.
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The warm spray of water soothed his muscles, and he leaned against the wall of the shower room, relaxing and letting the stream of water wash over him. He was trying to wash the layers of sweat and fluids that he had accumulated from yesterday’s ‘activities’ with Kimiko. She had showered before she retired last night, but Raimundo, having already lost a lot of sleep as part of his raid and mini-stakeout, had elected to go straight to sleep, which was why she was still in bed, while he was showering now. His thoughts of last night brought a smile to his face, and he could feel himself begin to harden as his mentally played back yesterday’s excursion. Glancing around, he listened carefully. Hearing no one, he let his hands move down to service himself, stroking as his grew to its final size of 15 inches. Grabbing the massive shaft with both hands, he rammed his hips forward, thrusting into his own hands and delighting in the feeling. A devious idea formed in his head, and sitting down with his back against the wall, he slowly maneuvered the end of his impressive shaft to his lips and let it slip inside the warm cavern. He applied the trick he had picked up from from Kimiko, corkscrewing his tongue around the bulbous head. Beginning to take himself down his throat, a sharp yell pierced the euphoric tranquility:
“Rai!”
He looked to see Clay’s large form standing in the doorway, a look of surprise fixed firmly on his face.
“Sorry about that, partner,” he quickly muttered in embarrassment. “If I’d known you’d be doing this then...” he trailed off as the huge shaft caught his attention. He always thought he was big, but the young Brazilian was simply enormous.
“Jees, Rai, how big is that thing.”
“15 inches” he proclaimed proudly. It was slightly vain, but the fact was that once he’d used the Changing Chopsticks, he’d wanted to know the size of his ‘return.’
He noticed his friend’s eyes widen in interest as he stated the fact, and saw the opportunity for some fun. "You can have a closer look if you like."
Clay wordlessly seated himself in between his friend's legs and took stock of the impressive sight before him. It wasn't long, though, before this wasn't enough, and he reached out to grasp the thick member in his hand. This still didn't feel like enough, and it wasn't long before the
Texan again went further, and gaining confidence he grasped the shaft with his other hand and began pumping.
The Brazilian above had a content smile on his face, and let out a moan of approval at his friend's ministrations. Feeling emboldened, Clay moved the huge head of his friend's gargantuan member to his mouth and deftly took it in with a single swoop. He quickly employed every trick in the book; corkscrewing his tongue as he effortlessly swallowed the entire member, rubbing the sensitive underside while applying vacuum-strength suction. Raimundo was extremely, and pleasantly, surprised at the oral mastery being inflicted on him, which made him all the more indignant when Clay stopped.
"Why did you stop?" he asked, complacent that he'd been left hanging on the edge.
"Because," he began in his thick Texan drawl, removing his shirt, "I want to go further."
He finished removing his temple robes and walked to the shower wall, bending over and bracing himself against the pipe work as the warm spray continued to cascade from the nozzle. Taking mental note of the proud and thick 12 inch member shooting out from between Clay's legs, Raimundo moved behind him, carefully positioning himself so the head lightly rested against the puckered ring. Feeling his friend completely relax, he pushed forward, slowly pushing against the walls of muscle as he sheathed himself within his large friend. The Brazilian heard a pleasured moan, and pushed forward slightly faster as he further ventured into the blissful orifice. Clay felt his
passage expanding as it accommodated the colossal intrusion. The phrase "practice makes perfect" certainly rang true in the Texan's mind as he felt only the slightest twinge of discomfort as the enormous pleasure of being stretched engulfed him.
As Rai's huge balls finally came to rest comfortably against Clay's firm ass, they both took a few seconds of rest. Impatience set in quickly, however, and a small buck of his partner's hips gave the Brazilian all the encouragement he needed to start the main event. He withdrew till only the head remained seated within the velvet vice, then rammed back in as powerfully as he could, eliciting a moan from both of them. This set the rhythm, as each new thrust elicited yet another moan until they merged together into a single, long expression of carnal delight. For Raimundo, the seemingly impossible ventures he was making into the delicate but strong walls as they squeezed and massaged his member were heaven. Likewise, the sensation of Rai thrusting in and out, setting nerves alight and striking his prostate again and again was euphoria for Clay. For the both of them, every thrust was another nudge towards the edge; an edge which was getting considerably closer.
Trying to control himself to prolong the experience, the Brazilian teen had a sudden spark of inspiration for how to end the encounter spectacularly, and pulled out completely. Before Clay could regain his senses and question what was going on, Rai had guided him backwards, positioning them so that he was sitting down with his back leaning against the wall, with the Texan straddling his hips.
Clay got the hint, and sank down so that the young South American was fully seated inside him again. Raimundo then returned the earlier favour by engulfing Clay's large member in his mouth,
applying the same techniques he'd been on the receiving end of earlier, Clay gasped as he began to ride the stiff rod, simultaneously face fucking the Brazilian.
As a result, it only took a short minute or so before the mutual euphoria lit the final fuse, and Clay exploded, unleashing a seemingly endless torrent of cum into Rai's eager mouth as he rhythmically clamped down on Rai's own shaft, sending him over the edge as well. The Brazilian withdrew as he began launching his own endless volleys of cum, lifting his mouth off his friend's shaft so that they both sat there showering each other in their thick essence.
After a seeming eternity, both men released their last few drops and collapsed against each other, panting heavily. When a few minutes of silent rest had passed, the active Brazilian had an idea.
"Clay? How do you feel about Kimiko?"
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