I'm loving the inclusion of Princess Arms, but I'm a little sad that her striking nose has been rinoplastied. I found it strangely attractive with the rest of her look. I'm hoping we'll get a reason why Mime is not to be included, because I would have loved for her to be part of Marco's harem, especially given the implications of her and those scarves she swallowed. Looking forward to see who Tom recruits to help his investigation.
On a constructive criticism note, I've noticed a few instances where the names of female participants gets mixed up. I know how tricky it can be with so many moving pieces.
Please ha e Hekapoo join in the herum next or soon.
Good stuff, man. Insterested to see what girls end up as Marco's partners.
this was a awesomely intresting story so far can't wait to see where this goes (no rush).
Awesome, always good to see some SVTFOE. Harem King Marco is the one true King lol Great work as always will be watching this story develop with interest.
Love to see more Star, especially from you George. I think calling the effects of the finale "the Smoosh" is pretty great. I look forward to seeing who joins Marco's harem and pray Ponyhead isn't one of them.