rate_review Reviews

NICE! hope you continue this story. in my option this has potential.

I think this was a unique story in terms of execution. I like the build up and the dialog free interaction with Maddie and Danny was well handled. I would refrain from calling Danny in his ghost form "it" however and while I understand it was Mother's Day when you posted this, I don't think the title fits with the story. Other than that, you did a pretty good jod.