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May 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm glad you started writing it again. looking forward to the next chapter!
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January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I'm enjoying the story a lot, I know saying that in print doesn't do it justice. You're keeping me on the edge of my seat. I hope you post the next chapter! soon!
PS. Your writing was much better this time, I didn't notice any mistakes. Good job!
PS. Your writing was much better this time, I didn't notice any mistakes. Good job!
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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes! that was fun! I want more! I want More!
You still need to work on your writing though.
You still need to work on your writing though.
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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A good start, some bad grammar but overall, a fun read. Next chapter had better be more involved or else, lol