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October 22, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Great story. If you're still active you should continue it.
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February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
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August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would give your story two thumbs up but the ending kind of stops abruptly with their sheared orgasm winding down then the story ends. what was said after that? did they confess they meant each other? did they go farther? or did they just fall asleep? I think you should at the very least fix this story's ending for your more long term fans if your never going to do a second chapter or sequel to it.
I'll be looking into your other works now since this is the first story I found by you.
I'll be looking into your other works now since this is the first story I found by you.
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very poignant, well-written story. I love how it starts so innocently with Bart and Lisa cryptically sharing their amorous thoughts about would-be classmates. It makes one wonder if Lisa even had a bad dream or if this was a set-up. ;)
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Simple but very sexy. I like.
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December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bart\Lisa fic always relevant
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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
rather good story, would like to see a second part at some point.
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Asome fic hope you make some more love your work keep it up
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would really love 2 read a part 2