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You might want to consider dropping the 1-2 sentence paragraphs, and reducing the spacing between paragraphs to a single line. It'll make your story easier to read. Likewise, I notice you have over 100 chapters, but none are very long (or would be if not for all the empty space). Maybe you could combine them into longer sections.

Wow, been a long time since I read this story and I had a lot of catching up to do!

Anyway, you are a talented and creative writer and I have been enjoying this story, but I can not help but be impatient for things to move along, it's getting rather tiresome seeing Zuko continue to hurt Katara.

You posted a previous chapter 162 again.

Hello, dearest author,

Great, great job so far; every chapter surprises me and keeps me wanting more...thank you for not making me wait too long :)

Katara has now been, finally, I guess, broken - that's what I got out of the story. I don't see how she can forgive Zuko for making her think she was sold and torturing her like that, but I do know that she has already given up on fighting, because she just can't do it anymore...I guess that makes sense; enough time has passed for that to happen. I'm also glad that Sokka finally came to his senses about Katara's situation.

I'm curious, though: how many months has passed since the beginning of the story? I mean, the comet must be right around the corner!

Anyways, thank you, and keep updating!

W/ Love,

Mimi

I'm bit confused. How did Zuko hide her on the ship, if he still couldn't tell who are the people that are eyes of Ozai there? He is now acting like a coward and I'm sure Katara will be even more mad than before, when she finds out. That he gagged himself as disguise is a nice idea, but he was never lucky so he will slip as always.

YAY it's him. I'm actually happy that it was him and no some strange men. I very excited to see how long Zuko can keep this act up. Epically after that last comment.

who bought Katara? what will happen next? Please update soon.

So Zuko doesn't know that Katara was sold? That quite strange, because I think Azula would told him that just to rill him up.

I absolutely love this story!! I stayed up all night to finish it and I can't wait for more. I can't stand the thought of Katara in with whoever has her now. I hope Zuko fries them when he finds out where she is. Really I love the way you called Mai a gold-digging bitch early on in the story. So many people think because she risked Azula's wrath helping Zuko in seson 3 that suddenly she is wonderful. When I think the woman just wants to be the Fire Lady. I think your portrayal of Mai is perfect. Zuko and Katara are great too. For a minute I thought you went to far with Zuko when I thought he killed Haru, I don't know how Katara could ever forgive him or herself if he had. I'm so glad he didn't. And the spirits of the Elements! Love them! Love this story!! Keep those chapters coming!

-Mary L.

Thank you for the update. Just wish we knew more about what is going on but I' sure it will be in the next chapter. However just to clarify the commander of the ship sold Katara correct?