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for Moonstruck Down

by FairySlayer

schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I can just see the hoof in the face after getting told off, but that has to hurt alot more than a face palm!
person JayDee
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bwa ha ha... The way you suddenly change the tone of the dialouge half way through is very funny. I had this totally sappy sparkly pony image in my head, thinking "Yep, white pony, night pony, I guess this is what they do..." which suddenly came to a screeching halt of hilarity. It's the kind of joke that works really well in the shorter set up and wind down - facehoofed is presumably a sharper edged face palm? Inherantly funny word right there!

I had to look up Alicorn in the context of MLP, the non-MLP definition I recall didn't fit :) Actually makes it even funnier than the standard ponies to my mental image!

(My search led me to someone describing "She is an Alicorn - a pegasus/unicorn combination made from two different ponies" which frankly gives me the idea of a very Dr Frankenstein meets stolen car chop shop operation)...
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Face hoof! Face hoof! You do know in my reality a face hoof would be a really bad thing, but that is hilarious! Fuck that! I'm going clubbing! Awesome. Grinning ear to ear like the true idiot I am! Thanks for sharing, FS, and nice to see you back!
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! Somehow I think Celestia is going to be doing more than facehoofing. On the other hand, I wouldn't mind hanging out with Luna. Marvelous use of the prompt!

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