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That was really brilliant, the dance scene was awesome, i swear it took like 15 pages. And Shego's new flipping and stuff was really nice, more of that is what I want to see. Oh idea! how bout a giant game of tag, parkour wise? that'd be something alright ^^ Great chapter as always ^^

That was wicked, wade is so cool. I bet he has a dozen ps3s hooked up to make a supercomputer. they can do that. I just hope wade found something awesome.

Yay, 9 liked this chapter alot.

So, she finally did it. Kim made the decision to move in with Shego and see how things turn out. I can tell the next few chapters are definitely going to be interesting.

"I don’t want you spending too much time with any of those European boys, you understand?" If James only knew! :p ;)

One mistake I noticed -- ...Kim was relived to see Shego slouch down... -- "relieved."

Another great chapter, LK. And congratulations! Your story has now reached 50 chapters... and it's still going! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and the start of Kim and Shego's new living arrangements. Keep up the good work.

you evil tease

you leave me woundering what Kim is going to do the you add all this strangeness with wade

I hat you and like you so much right now.,I can't wait to see what happens

Whoa, Nerd Alert!. I could barely follow this chapter. So many technical computer terms that I can't even begin to wrap my head around.

When it looked like Wade had finally gotten somewhere, the program kept stopping him stone-cold. No wonder Wade got so frustrated. Heck, I got frustrated as I read this. Even though Wade couldn't really beat the program, he was finally able to outsmart it; he got a good look at it, but now he's in more shock than before! What is it?! What are Kim and company dealing with here?!

Great, suspenseful chapter! Awaiting the next one, somewhat patiently. :p

More Intrigue??? I'm beginning to think this story shall never resolve itself and the "Great Mystery" that is the open-ended, giant conspiracy you've set-up here, more so than if Kim and Shego are ever going to get together (dangling that carrot isn't enough anymore, it hasn't been for a while). You seem perfectly happy milking this story, adding mystery upon mystery without any resolutions, EVEN "meaningful" minor ones to mark the passage of progress towards a finale or climax. Not even the X-FIles had the gall to milk their show's plot (not for a lack of trying) long after it should have given up the ghost.

Far from adding to suspense, all this only serves to anger and frustrate. The small bones you do throw out and the ever increasing dead-ends or plot points that go no where (Nana's reluctance to help her own family, with her truly lame justifications, and Wade's frustrations are only the latest in a long string) and the dangling carrot of ANY KiGo (as I've mentioned) aren't enough to keep me reading.

What began for me as a great mystery by a talented, but unknown to me, writer, now drags on like a Telemundo soap opera or the beating of a dead horse. The story feels flat, without momentum or drive, and stagnate. It's all ego masturbation.

For me: I'm done. I don't care anymore.

I love this chapter, but I can't believe you just left it hanging like that in the end. Also, I will have to see how you handle it in the continuing chapters, but the shift from Kim to Wade could make this chapter feel like it was stuck in as a afterthought. I can't wait to read more.

Herald

Wow this chapter threw me off completely ,I thought I had tinny foot hold on this whole nebulles story but this chapter b[ew that out of ms delusional mind

I loved the dancing between Kim and Shego! It was so sweet! I knew before this chapter was even posted that those two would definitely draw the attention of most, if not all, of the women in the club. It may not have been Hot Lesbian Sex, but hey, it worked for me. Now that doesn't mean that I don't want to see some actual Kigo before this story ends. Trust me, I want KIGO!!! ;)

Loved the change from dirty dancing to martial arts exhibition! The song was perfect for the scene! Kim and Shego's fights were always crowd-pleasers, and this one was no exception. Even though, technically, this was not an actual fight. ;) :p

Nana tracked Kim down to the club? Now that's just creepy. And Kim still doubts that Nana may know something? Sheesh, denial much?

Shego's loving her new physique more and more, and so am I! :D

This was an exciting chapter! Great job, as always. :) And as always, I'm looking forward to what happens next! ;)