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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's nice. But What I don't understand is, why is he able to do so much to her when he's technically a Skeleton. Why not do something to where mandy demanded him to resemble a human for once. This story could be so much more.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm...grim's a skeleton. He doesnt have lips, or skin or anything....Haha it was good and hilarious though! So yeah when he kisses her all she'll feel is teeth lmao O_o but it just shows how powerful love is ^ - ^
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I always wondered if Mandy and Grim would do it. And how they would able to do it. O_O That was interesting. Oh by the way. If you remember from that one episode where they show Grim as a kid he was a child when the Cavemen were around. I'm trying to say that the decade thing may be a little...untrue. Ha "untrue" this is a fanfiction. Here I am trying to stick logic into it! What's wrong with me? You know what the story is fine. Forget I said anything...
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't she have gone through puberty in Middle school not High school?
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOKKKK?!
Well...Frankly it freaked the shit out of me. ITs good for a sex story but the begining of "De" is slightly confusing unless you think about it for a while. Also you spelt "Tongue" "Tounge". The Chapters were well based but a little too jumpy. But other then that it was ok. Personally I would have liked a living partner better *laugh*
,JoxBox
Well...Frankly it freaked the shit out of me. ITs good for a sex story but the begining of "De" is slightly confusing unless you think about it for a while. Also you spelt "Tongue" "Tounge". The Chapters were well based but a little too jumpy. But other then that it was ok. Personally I would have liked a living partner better *laugh*
,JoxBox
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic! I liked the bit about Erwin's pimples, it kept with the gross factor of the show. I do enjoy this pairing, rarely used though it is.
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March 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intriging but one thing grim has no tongue
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good. Alright. You kept the characters in character great.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was listenning to 'Don't Fear the Reaper' while reading this, which made it all the more entertaining. Although I was rather surprised that Mandy wasn't the dominating type - always figured something like that, but wth. Justification had hit the mark. This, I like.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I have been looking all over for a MandyxGrim fic.So thanks for making one!