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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool more please
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more! your first chapter is ambiguous, i don't know where it will go. And you did very well, especially since english is not your first language.
schedule
December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this is seems to be an intelligent, well-written story. Reading through the Simpsons section I have been a bit...let down by what is up here.
I am liking the symbolism of the "white shirt" and Bart is IC. Beautiful. Skinner seems IC as well and I have no complaints.
Yes, so this is encouragement for you to continue on your fic.
I am liking the symbolism of the "white shirt" and Bart is IC. Beautiful. Skinner seems IC as well and I have no complaints.
Yes, so this is encouragement for you to continue on your fic.