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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I hope to see more stories from you! Too bad it ended here :(..
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would very much like a follow up story to this, about what happened to everyone, and Kim, and Shego fighting Drakken perhaps? If you've already written one, e-mail me, and tell me.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the WAy, E-mail is EmperorJaden@yahoo.com
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I hope to see mor storys frum you in the feucher.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Cow! That was an amazing story! I loved the ending!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuri i likes
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the better Kim Possible stories I have reed. It was clean and I know the charters so you really hit it on the head…other then the Cheerlead squad…but Bonnie you got her right…lol…if you write another about Kim I will look fro it ;)…wtg
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool
Please Write More
like... maybe a sequel.
Please Write More
like... maybe a sequel.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. (I fell in love with your story "Karaoke Night" over at TMFFA, what a nice surprise to find you here as well!)
As others have said, it's an intriguing universe you've set up here in this story -- I'd love to see you tell about Ron's adventures during the 3 years, as well as what happens afterwards.
As others have said, it's an intriguing universe you've set up here in this story -- I'd love to see you tell about Ron's adventures during the 3 years, as well as what happens afterwards.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work; better than I've come to expect from you in the past (and that's saying a lot). Good spelling, good grammar, and exceptional dialogue. There was a lot of tangible emotion in some parts, and the end almost had me in tears. 10/10.
Thus said, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story except for one facet: I myself am working on the exact same thing. Kim and Shego on a deserted island for several years with a relationship slowly developing. Although, in mine, there is no abandoned hotel or anything. Just Kim, Shego, and a harsh, unforgiving island that forces them to work together.
Thus said, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story except for one facet: I myself am working on the exact same thing. Kim and Shego on a deserted island for several years with a relationship slowly developing. Although, in mine, there is no abandoned hotel or anything. Just Kim, Shego, and a harsh, unforgiving island that forces them to work together.