rate_review Reviews

That was EXCELLENT. Please write some more, I found it very romantic and sweet.

Pretty good, I'd say. It needs a bit of work in the structuring area. Try MS Word or an HTML program.

Honestly, I don't know why I liked this fic. In most other fandoms, I prefer Unconventional couples and femmeslash all the way, but Kim Possible is the first, and probably only, fandom in which I've fallen in love with a canon couple, which is of course, Kim/Ron. But the way it was written, without a violent Kim/Ron breakup, it was a good read. Keep up the good work.


-The Steel Angel

I used .txt on the first half. It looks good in wordwrap...

So it took a while to read, but awsome all the same. Tip though- break up your text please!!!! Difficult to follow but awsome all the same.

There was a surprise! Noy only interesting but fairly well written. The only thing that keeps me from giving it five stares is the failure to space brtween paragraphs for easier reading