Reviews for Cheeky Girl

BY : Fairy-Slayer

  • From ANON - Big Brother on October 06, 2016

    You are sick.

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  • From GeorgeGlass on May 12, 2016

    I don't read much The Simpsons fanfic, chiefly because I stopped watching the show years ago. But this was one of yours, and it's in a fandom I'm familiar with, so I thought I'd give this story a look. There's a lot to like about it, but I'll focus on three things in particular:

    First, Lisa's fetish. I loves me some girl-on-girl analingus, and you describe the acts well. At the same time, I liked that Lisaís ass-fetish knows no age or gender, so there were a variety of asses to serve as potential objects of her lust. And you make the whole thing a bit more believable by showing that Lisa does still draw the line somewhere, given her reservations about fooling around with Bart.

    Second, all the Lisa/Maggie action. I loves me some babycon, too.

    Third, Jessica Lovejoy. Sheís not a character I was ever particularly interested in, but you do a fantastic job of portraying her as a mystery wrapped in an enigma topped with a hair bow. There were several critical points at which I couldnít guess whether what she was saying was the truth or a lie, or whether her reaction was genuine or fake. But she does have real feelings, strong ones, and that makes her a wonderfully three-dimensional foil for Lisa.

    In conclusion, nicely done.

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  • From Aysha on June 23, 2012

    Hi FairySlayer I like that name :) I saw Cheeky Girl on the review exchange thread and I thought I would check it out. I just got done reading the last chapter and I have to say that I thought it was a really good story. I like the way you took your time progressing the story segment by segment. You really did a good job building up the readerís anticipation for the next scene and didn't just rush into the sex. You gave us just enough to pull us along right up to the finally. I wonít say it was the best story but it was a lot of fun

    Now for the concrit: There were a few places where I think you kind of got a head of yourself when you were writing and you let some words out, so I would suggest that you read the story. Try to do it without anticipating the next word you know, as if you had never seen it before. I know itís hard because you wrote it but thatís what it takes if you don't have a beta and I never have. I have reread my stories maybe ten times each and I still find mistakes. :P

    Other than that I you have a very good story here!

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