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Reviews for In the Enemy's Fortress

By : Spamilla
  • From ANON - CrazyAlice on April 17, 2016
    WOW talk about crazy love but in all the story was good but i kinda wished the ending to be a bit different and when Danny became possessed i was like this is not going to end well just wished Vlad would survived and became lovers with Danny but this anding was expected i would kill that guy to if someone did that to me
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on January 09, 2011
    Wow. This was a good story though I was expecting some romantic ending... lol
    No matter what though, I loved it.
    xoxo,
    Kitkat
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2009
    That's it? No follow up?
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  • From pontaloon on February 15, 2009
    the ending was kind of... disapointing. i loved the twist that everything Vlad had told him was a lie!!!! that was so brilliant and unexpected, but then the story just fizzles out into blah. and i also think it was sortof lame that Vlad was going to kill Danny with a gun. thats so unlike him (saying fuck as much as he did was also unlike him. hes too dignified for that).

    Suggestion:
    After Danny kills Vlad and learns that everything is a lie, the spirit possesses Vlad's dead body and takes over the world with Danny as his pet (Danny is more or less dead inside so he goes along with it, not caring anymore)

    i know the suggestion is sortof weak, but its an idea right? anyway, i really liked the fic as a whole and will probably go back and read it a few more times in the future, so good job ^^
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  • From WiccanVampire on January 12, 2009
    You're little too much repetitive.
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  • From JunkieMurderer on January 06, 2009
    Just found the link for this fic again... Happy to see it's been updated since I lost it! Looking forward to reading how this ends!

    Oh, and happy new year!
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  • From ANON - izxsvo on November 18, 2008
    I really like this story, but it has quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. Have you considered finding a beta?
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  • From ANON - Nakokun on October 27, 2008
    I hoped this to happend since the first chapter. This is the Danny I like. And Vlad is more bastard here than any other in any fanfic ever.
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  • From JunkieMurderer on October 16, 2008
    Yeah, that spirit isn't gonna be happy with Vlad... Most stories about enchanted objects (fables and legends stories, not Diznee stories) have said object bound by specific rules, so that whatever infernal being powers it can't get loose and go on a bloody rampage. Cheating these rules either ends with the spirit vanishing, possessing the nearest body, KILLING the jerk outright, or swapping places with him for great irony. Trapping this being alone with an unstable Danny... Vlad is in for it.

    Yay! Update!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 08, 2008
    Wow Vlad really did just use Danny. I wonder what will happen to him now
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  • From ANON - danna~chan on October 08, 2008
    Yes, it makes me very sad too, to see it dying out T.T I'm thankful though for people like you who still write great stories for the rest of us. I do hope to see anther chapter up soon ^_~ You story is great!thank you so much for writing it
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  • From AJAngelique on October 07, 2008
    mg omg omg omg omg please update soon!
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  • From ANON - diyami on September 11, 2008
    I really like your fic. I can't wait to see what Danny will do, hopefully Sam and Tucker will get to him or he will find a way-out.
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on August 24, 2008
    I'm afraid you may be right about Vlad in this fic - he's not so much of a thinker, is he? He will never have Danny completely, at least realistically. He wrote his own failure in the begonning when he chose to begin with using him invaluably from the get go - I know this as both a Domme and a Psychology major. To bend Danny's will as a nonconsensual completely to Vlad, the way he took it, would take anywhere from three years to a decade - unfortunately, I don't believe this fits within Vlad's intended timeframe. It would have been much more useful if Vlad had just been damned patient and 'earned' Danny's trust, sidetracking any shortcoming and turning it back on Danny as his own fault - any punishment, for example. Read up on Stokholm Syndrome. Humans are social pack animals and long for the contact of others. As a lonely captive, and a teenage boy at that, Danny would have gone along with whatever Vlad wanted in short order, I'd imagine. It's an automatic human defensive manouver we have wired into us. Even better if more traits of BDSM were to be involved; everything from ownership - collars, markings and the like - to sexual activity. It's a binding sort of thing, famous for making one genuinely desperate to please at a rapid rate. That's what BDSM is designed to do - it's manipulating our natural primal instincts as pack animals for pleasure.

    Not that I don't enjoy the fic. I do. Read every word so far. I just can't stop shaking my head at Vlad whenever he makes such mistakes as he does, so I had to rant at something. Maybe you're planning something else; not like I know where you're taking the story, right?
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  • From ANON - Murder Junkie on August 09, 2008
    I don't know how long it's been since this was last updated (Four months? Five?). There's narry a whisper of life left in the fandom, save the last gasps of the truly devoted. Yet I still dredge the bottom of this murky lake, hoping to find something to satisfy myself with...

    I just made myself sound like a depraved necrophiliac, didn't I? Ah well...

    This was a surprising pleasure to read. I don't usually go for rape fics, but I very much enjoyed this one. I do hope you keep writing it.
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