Reviews for Carnal Instincts

BY : Laurel23


  • From LunarianPyrate on April 16, 2021

    Love it!



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  • From ANON - Nieka95 on February 07, 2015

    This story is great! I can't wait until the next chapter!

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  • From ten195 on June 07, 2012

    Ok am loving this story and this primal Arnold. I love this other side of him that helga could bring out. I have a few suggestions if Yu don't mind, how about.an encounter where Arnold touches helga in class under the table while talking to a friend or something or a public bathroom adventure or there in a library or something and Arnold goes down on helga under the table. Nothing to big but pleaze continue to write.

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  • From Silent_Pluto on September 15, 2010

    whoa baby, if only study time was that fun!
    lmao! I love these. Ur good!

    Kudoz!~
    Silent Pluto

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  • From budthespud on September 13, 2010

    I am frigging loving this. I love how dark this Arnold is, it's a welcome change despite me loving a dominant Helga. I do hope that some delicious romance does surface between the two, I mean, it IS Arnold and Helga after all, no way this would just be some silly teenage fling after the things they've been through together! Besides, sex and romance work so well together!

    Its a lot of fun reading these, and I'm so glad you are continuing it. After reading so many FF.net ArnoldXHelga stories, with plenty of romance but no sex, it's really satisfying my own carnal instincts to see how these two work under the covers! :>

    I look forward to the next chapter!

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  • From Kurumi-chan69 on October 12, 2009

    Awesome possum!!!

    Whew...is is hot in here...or is it just me?

    I definitely, must say, this story is breathtaking...on multiple levels...C;

    Or what you have written so far...anyway

    This story is developing, at a comfortable pace....

    Not to mention that to me personally, the story, has a realistic, vibe too it...you know?

    Like I can find myself, connecting to your story, on 'almost' every single layer/level...

    I love how I can simply suspend disblief...and truly take in the story and the characters that drive it...

    Keep up the excellent work...

    I also love how you portrayed both Arnold and Helga, and that they are the center piece's...

    (I hope their relationship will develop further)

    What I am getting at is that if Arnold, at the current moment, is acknowleding that he is becoming addicted to having sex with 'one' person...mainly, Helga...

    Well, to me that sounds like Arnold and Helga's relationship could open up into a romantic-everlasting-life time kind of deal...

    Unless, Helga is not on the same level as Arnold...but the story, did just, start after all...and you are the author, whatever you say goes...right?

    I would be curious, to see, what would happen if Helga or even Arnold were to seek sex from the respective opposite sex(to get some variety)...would either one of them, become not only jealous...but possessive?

    I will wait patiently for the rest of the story...forever...if I have too...C;

    UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!

    As soon as you can, of course...

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  • From lozza_pilgrim on August 04, 2007

    Fuck that's hot!! WHY have u not updated yet?! Haha. When u update this next (hopefully soon!) can u email me or something cause I don't want to miss a moment!! Love ur work!

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  • From Mysticlady on June 20, 2007

    Great story, can't wait for an update!

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  • From Mysticlady on December 11, 2006

    Love it! I like the fact that you don't make it sound cheesy but really well written. Update soon!


    ~L

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