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Reviews for Jealousy

By : sesshyluver
  • From ANON - Chassy on January 19, 2016
    I loved it! Please continue with the story. "Must have more!"
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  • From Isadorabelle on August 24, 2007
    I read this story a while back and really liked it but didn't get a chance to review. I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you decide to write more. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2007
    Good story. I have only one complaint. The female Gargoyles eyes always glow red and the males' glow white. Well, I don't know what color Una's eyes glowed. I didn't really pay attention to her. Again good story.
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  • From Nahaujaret on May 14, 2007
    This was a great fic. I just wish you would add more to it. Thanks for writing it and sharing.
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  • From ANON - reader on November 23, 2006
    good
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on November 09, 2006
    That was one freakin' awesome lemon I have a suggestion for the next chapter,in chapter 2 have Goliath's POV of the story and for chapter 3 have Aidan's history(where he came from,how he met Demona,etc).For chapter 4 have Aidan's POV of the story.Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on October 27, 2006
    That was a sweet lemon,for the next chapter you should put up Goliath's side of the story from why he started avoiding Elisa like the plague to Aidan's arrival to claiming Elisa.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on October 20, 2006
    I can't wait to see what happens next,oh and by the way Elisa was wearing jeans and not a skirt when Goliath was ripping off her clothing.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on October 19, 2006
    Awwww that was so sweet,I just loved how Goliath was so f*ckin' jealous of Aidan especially since he wanted to court Elisa.This has been one of the best Gargoyles fanfics I've ever read especially the Lemon scene that was one of my favourite parts of the story.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on October 19, 2006
    I just loved how Goliath was so f*ckin' jealous of Aidan especially since he wanted to court Elisa.This has been one of the best Gargoyles fanfics I've ever read especially the Lemon scene that was one of my favourite parts of the story.
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  • From ANON - Monet on September 18, 2006
    OoooH so hotness. i i was tunred on does this mean im into beastality or something? My only negative comment would have to be just how much does G. weigh. I mean i think he would be a good... well idunno pretty heavy. Elisa wouldnt have much of a bed. doggystyle is hotness!
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  • From ANON - Lamenthatic on August 05, 2006
    Great fic!
    Good plot, I like your use of a new character to get the plot going and your pacing in the sex scene. Great.
    I want to suggest a little more detail though, there were times when I wondered things like, "what did Goliath do with his wings? did he cape them during the sex scene or did he let them hover above the both of them?"
    "Where'd he cut the bra? If he cut it in the front, between the cups (which is sensual and hot,) Then she's still got it hanging off her arms, if he cut at the straps, it's still attached to her waist (annoying), If he cuts at the back, he might as well have just undone the thing"
    Also, it was wonderfull to add in the inadvertant emphisis of cleavage, but goliath didn't react!
    Adding in some sort of effect it had on Goliath or his flying would have really given that scene a boost.
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  • From ANON - Ivana C. on July 27, 2006
    Yep. That has to be the best Gargoyles fic I have ever read. I grew up with the show, and always thought that Elisa and Goliath belonged together (Sexual tension abounded with those two!). And your rendition was perfect. The characters were very much true to self, and the drama of the third party (Aiden) was a brilliant lever to bring out Goliath's territorial nature concerning Elisa. Bravo!!! I heart this!!!!
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  • From ANON - birdman45 on July 14, 2006
    There isn't enough Goliath and Elisa stories out there, they make a great couple. But there is one small problem with the story, Goliath is not Blue he is Lavender or darkish Purple.
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  • From ANON - BRP on June 25, 2006
    A most passionate story. Could u please write some more.

    In the meantime...

    =Hunts down her husband=


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