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Reviews for Jealousy

By : sesshyluver
  • From ANON - BRP on June 25, 2006
    “I didn’t like the way that male was looking at you. He was courting you after I’d already laid claim at Xanatos’ office. When you didn’t seem that resistant to his advances, I decided it was time to show you who you belonged to,” he stated.

    O_o!!!

    BLOODY HADES IS GOLIATH HOT!!!

    =Fans herself and faints=



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  • From ANON - BRP on June 25, 2006
    “Goliath, what h-has gotten in t-to you,” she asked breathlessly.

    “I’m claiming what is mine,” he growled out before ripping her short skirt...

    O_o!!!

    Goliath and Eliza...sigh...

    =Fans herself and faints=


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  • From ANON - FallenFromGrace on December 22, 2005
    I agree with Ida, Elisa is too much of a cop to wear heels and a skirt to a hunt, she knows that would be just dumb to wear when you're going to fight a gargoyle. Otherwise, I LOVED IT!!! Absolutely, there are not near enough Goliath/Elisa pairings, and yours is fantastic. Please add more, I hope yours is not a one shot.
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  • From Idamonae on December 14, 2005
    Very nice! Goliath would definitly be one of those men that would need another treading into their territory to wake them up:) Idiots.
    My only complant was Elisa's outfit. She knew she was going to track down Demona. Having had experience with that in the past, and considering her character, I really had to force myself to keep reading when she dressed up in both a skirt AND strappy shoes to go on a demon hunt with Goliath and Co. It just didn't seem reasonable *at all*. I can see her reasons for wanting to, perhaps. Goliath would definitely notice, but given their characters, and your establishing Aidan as a threat, I hardly think the outfit was necessary. Nice story though:) Thank you for posting.
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  • From JasmineShigeru on December 14, 2005
    I really loved this story. I love to read a good Elisa and Goliath.
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  • From ANON - Gemini on November 29, 2005
    Whoohooo! Finally, another one! I've been waiting for more stories. This was really good. I hope there's another addition to this chapter. If there is, I can't wait!^_^ Goliath and Elisa are my favorite couple. Please udate soon! Goliath/Elisa juiciness forever!^_-
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  • From ANON - fan on November 28, 2005
    There not many Galith Elisa stories. It was good to see him jealous and looking out for Elisa
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  • From ANON - Kurama'sFoxyMiko on November 27, 2005
    That waws pretty good. There's not that many Gargoyle fics out there htat have M/F pairings, so it's good to see another out there. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kogasangel on November 27, 2005
    You know, I have not seen Gargoyles since I was a teenager and I remember what Goliath and Elisa look like so it was easy to picture them. you did an excellent job of writing this out, and it was great!! Good job and good luck with all of your other fics.

    KogasAngel
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