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Reviews for Pink Wee Beasty (Juniper Lee)

By : aesren
  • From Bishonen on December 18, 2006
    Been a while since I checked this fic not a lot of new chapters but the plot you streted semmes like it could be intresting one tip get a proof reader to fix it up it made my story look a lot better

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Aki on September 21, 2006
    oohh good story keep it going!
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  • From ANON - SP on August 26, 2006
    Well it wasn't terrible. But a virgin whole would exerience alot of pain from an cock or tentacle that was big. Plus there is something it would break and more pain.


    And it would help to use spacing. Break them into easy to swallow paragraphs.

    I do hope you make another chapter
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  • From ANON - Psycho the Weasel on July 02, 2006
    hee-he-heeee, sorry i didnt review in a while i was unaware of when the the site got up and running again, but i'm delited to see that you've continued updating, heee-hee, and a PLOT no less, heee-he-heee. well i'm still an avid reader of your story and i hope to see a Chapter six very soon, heee-he. take care, and thanks for all the notices and the ends of your chapters
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  • From Louk on February 07, 2006
    Good story, but possibly a little anatomically incorrect on the Ophelia/Tauros chapter. If I'm not mistaken about Centaurs their reproductive organs would be located in the same place as their animal side, not their human sides, are making the fact of him holding her up and thrusting into her at the same time impossible. Of course I never took Greek Mythology so if you can prove me wrong then please respond with a website where I can find the most info on Centaurs in one of my stories, please. And log in before replying so I know it's from you.
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  • From ANON - Psycho the Weasel on January 24, 2006
    hee-hee-heeee. Plots always good. A little short, but im glad to see that you didn't abandon the story. hee-heee. I look forward to a review. And Thanks for the mention. hee-he
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  • From ANON - Psycho the Weasel on November 19, 2005
    Hee-hee-heeee-eee-he-he-heee-heee, Very good, hee-hee, I've been waiting for an update from you, and this story was worth the wait. the chapters with Tauros and Graj were the best so far, but they have all been very good. Hee-heeee, keep up the good work.
    -Psycho the Weasel
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  • From Bishonen on November 10, 2005
    You have to update this it's got alot of promise.
    With love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Psycho the Weasel on September 29, 2005
    hee-hee-hee, Please, Take your time, there's no rush, I look forward to your update, Hee-hee-he, I'll keep checking up on the story
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  • From TimidStrangeness on September 27, 2005
    This is really hot. There's not enough tentacle shit out there, you know? :3 Lol poor June was raped by a weird little monster. Ever considered doing a threesome fic with her and her two brothers? That would be even cooler than this! But hey, this got me hot. x3
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  • From ANON - the phantom on September 27, 2005
    nice...very nice there aren't that many juniper lee fics out there....keep the chaps comin' but I would like to see a longer one....
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  • From ShadrachVS on September 23, 2005
    Ok, much better; the flow is more even, well it quickens at the last of the 'exploration scene' but that is actually very correct for it. Grammar, elaboration, structure, and flow all show significant improvement; Keep working at it like this and your stories will become very well written pieces of literature. And I have to say, maybe it is the absense of tentacles, but this one was erm... gah I need a cigarette...
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  • From ANON - Psycho the Weasel on September 18, 2005
    He-Hee. A nice sequel to a nice story. A little short, but its getting there. I liked the way up made up the Ophelia/June part. Hee-Hee, "original" to say the least. Thanks for mentioning my name at the end there, I look forward to your next update. He-he-hee Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Nicolae on September 17, 2005
    Nice job, hope to see more. Next one should be a random monster. Also, paragraphing and maybe a BETA reader would be great to improve on the story.
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  • From ANON - anacsadder on September 16, 2005
    Though I must agree this is rather short and swiftly paced, Juniper Lee stumbling across a hentai tentacle monster is too funny. I've never seen the the show, at least not all the way through, but I understand enough to appreciate this. Mostly I read it because I'm a tentacle fan, lol. Penguin Peace.
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