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Reviews for Totally Captive

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  • From Lunarsilver on March 20, 2016
    Maybe when it's Sam's turn as she struggles to say no one should like bondage it's plain wrong but when Alex punishes her by spanking Sam starts to finally feel good and starts being obedient
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  • From bonnybanshey on July 31, 2010
    More I love this
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  • From bimorgan on November 30, 2007
    its good so far but the show must go on with at least one more chapter please
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  • From Mangafreak on November 10, 2006
    finish this story man. i got to see how it ends. i mean you haven't even got to the good stuff yet!
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  • From ANON - Kay on February 09, 2006
    Can't wait for more, this sounds really intresting.
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  • From ANON - Lucas on December 18, 2005
    great story but your letting it drag out get to the bondage and domination already
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  • From ANON - Prophecy on October 18, 2005
    I can't wait to read what happens next.Plz Update Soon
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  • From LuluCat on September 20, 2005
    You must write more! You can't just leave us hanging like that!
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  • From ANON - Dark Novei on September 11, 2005
    I must say, this is getting good.
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  • From ANON - twitch on August 17, 2005
    very nice story please keep going please

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  • From ANON - spy fan on July 29, 2005
    when are you going to write more?.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    This is AWESOME. But it needs some Sex GAWD

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  • From ANON - Mike Toth on July 20, 2005
    Well, aside from an odd predilection toward muttering and saying things 'coolly', there's nothing special about the story. Paper-thin plot, stiff characterization and no scene development. Like, in the very beginning, I could have skipped to the end of the chapter and understood what was going on. I'm not a grader, but I'm giving it an arbitrary C-. I hope the sex turns it around.
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  • From ANON - Bumble Boy_Wonder on July 19, 2005
    Dude............. Where are the goods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - 70s rocker on July 13, 2005
    wheres the action??????????????????????
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