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Reviews for Totally Captive

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2005
    wow.......................................................... just wow.............. that was pretty good........................... can't wait for the next chap
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 09, 2005
    ooooh, intrigueing, keep up the great work!!
    Love it!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - LuffySP on July 05, 2005
    It's good. Although I always thought of Sam as a dom. Anyway. The one thing is the OVERUSED phrase of "ravishing raven haired" and "ravishing redhead". keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Shadow_king on July 04, 2005
    Come on get to some real action
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  • From ANON - BillY BOb on July 03, 2005
    Come on. Come on write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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  • From ANON - DrAgoN on July 03, 2005
    Jerry is spelled with J not G, but i don't really care as long as you write more.
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  • From ANON - Red Phoenix on July 03, 2005
    This is VERY GOOD. As well as a pleasurable side there is also mystery and a pretty good storyline. I am looking forward to seeing sam in a bondage scene - should be a laugh.
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  • From ANON - superboy on July 03, 2005
    very good mystery. i would like to know what happens so please write more fast. i can't wait
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  • From ANON - johnny boy on July 03, 2005
    hurry up and write more its really good
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  • From ANON - mickey on July 03, 2005
    good. please write more quick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From CBMC on June 30, 2005
    quote: His name's spelled with a J not a G.

    I didn't read this story, but since such an ass, I'll point out this is an unintentional reference to the rapper Kurious.
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  • From ANON - Infinite Leviathan on June 29, 2005
    YES! DO MORE! DO MORE! Pleasseee...no one else is adding new stories except for me and this one your doing.
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  • From ANON - Dark Wolf on June 28, 2005


    Please continue! His name's spelled with a J not a G.
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  • From ANON - Psychedelic Leviathan on June 28, 2005
    Start with the pornographic parts please. I know you can do it. And put Mandy in too, she needs a good lession in humility and what better way to get that then through forced bondage?

    It's J-erry actually.
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