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Reviews for Island Hopping

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  • From ANON - demondragon6 (who needs signing in anyway?) on July 28, 2006
    Very nice! I hope to see more stories from you! Too bad it ended here :(..
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  • From ANON - Emperor Jaden on January 19, 2006
    By the WAy, E-mail is EmperorJaden@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Emperor Jaden on January 19, 2006
    I would very much like a follow up story to this, about what happened to everyone, and Kim, and Shego fighting Drakken perhaps? If you've already written one, e-mail me, and tell me.
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  • From ANON - fireinu on January 07, 2006
    I like it. I hope to see mor storys frum you in the feucher.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2006
    Holy Cow! That was an amazing story! I loved the ending!
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  • From ANON - gnurjas on October 21, 2005
    yuri i likes
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  • From ANON - Hawk on October 10, 2005
    This has to be one of the better Kim Possible stories I have reed. It was clean and I know the charters so you really hit it on the head…other then the Cheerlead squad…but Bonnie you got her right…lol…if you write another about Kim I will look fro it ;)…wtg
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  • From ANON - Fogu-s_Tofu on October 05, 2005
    Cool
    Please Write More
    like... maybe a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Damion Kitsune on September 10, 2005
    Great work. (I fell in love with your story "Karaoke Night" over at TMFFA, what a nice surprise to find you here as well!)

    As others have said, it's an intriguing universe you've set up here in this story -- I'd love to see you tell about Ron's adventures during the 3 years, as well as what happens afterwards.
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  • From ANON - Jarkota on August 07, 2005
    Sorry for the double post; I forgot to ask you if it was alright with you if I continued to write my own story. I would hate to be accused of stealing someone's idea.
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  • From ANON - Jarkota on August 07, 2005
    Nice work; better than I've come to expect from you in the past (and that's saying a lot). Good spelling, good grammar, and exceptional dialogue. There was a lot of tangible emotion in some parts, and the end almost had me in tears. 10/10.

    Thus said, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story except for one facet: I myself am working on the exact same thing. Kim and Shego on a deserted island for several years with a relationship slowly developing. Although, in mine, there is no abandoned hotel or anything. Just Kim, Shego, and a harsh, unforgiving island that forces them to work together.
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  • From ANON - Broken on August 01, 2005
    I am surprised at the quality. This story is believable and entertaining. The characters are actually kept in character throughout the story, which, overall, ehances it greatly. Just one question, will there be more?
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  • From ANON - b on July 25, 2005
    Quite good. I enjoyed the interplay of the characters before the lemon bits (which I mostly skipped over). I'm not sure what the purpose was for the 3-years on the island bit; it seemed like the most interesting plot development happened within, as Shego points out, the 6 month period. Similarly, giving them television reception blurs the ending where lots of things have gone on. Minor details, which is a testament to how well the story overall stood up.
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  • From ANON - PDmon on June 25, 2005
    This was a very nice story, and I would like to know what happens afterwards. And also what happened with Drakken, Ron, and the others while Kim and Shego were lost.
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  • From ANON - kitty on June 16, 2005
    i loved it! but how could u end it? i wanna c kim's parents reactions :) plz plz plz make a sequel
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