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By : Clayton
  • From ANON - PDmon on June 25, 2005
    That was EXCELLENT. Please write some more, I found it very romantic and sweet.
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  • From ANON - The Steel Angel on June 15, 2005
    Pretty good, I'd say. It needs a bit of work in the structuring area. Try MS Word or an HTML program.

    Honestly, I don't know why I liked this fic. In most other fandoms, I prefer Unconventional couples and femmeslash all the way, but Kim Possible is the first, and probably only, fandom in which I've fallen in love with a canon couple, which is of course, Kim/Ron. But the way it was written, without a violent Kim/Ron breakup, it was a good read. Keep up the good work.


    -The Steel Angel
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  • From Clayton on May 25, 2005
    I used .txt on the first half. It looks good in wordwrap...
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  • From heartofstone on May 20, 2005
    So it took a while to read, but awsome all the same. Tip though- break up your text please!!!! Difficult to follow but awsome all the same.
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  • From ANON - Bill Ponder on May 12, 2005
    There was a surprise! Noy only interesting but fairly well written. The only thing that keeps me from giving it five stares is the failure to space brtween paragraphs for easier reading















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