Click Here!

Reviews for Test of the heart.

By : englishwitch2003
  • From Nytefyre on March 04, 2019

    This was well written and had an emotional depth rarely found in fanfic.  

    Thanks for writing and sharing.


    Report Review

  • From Martialartsmaster on July 03, 2014
    Good chapter but it would have been better if Vanisher had sex with Shifter
    Report Review

  • From master30 on June 29, 2011
    I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
    Report Review

  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 09, 2011
    Am I wrong for trying to over think this cause I swear I have a headache trying to figure out if Tony really is Tony because of this last chapter right here. I mean if i was paying attention in the one before that she was totally devoted to Tony even when Psychewave tried to flirt with her all she was interested in was Tony so why would she be imagining herself giving Psyche head. oh well enough broading on to the next chap
    Report Review

  • From stretch1989 on April 23, 2007
    I tell you what---That was fu*cking awesome.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tucker on September 27, 2006
    Holy shit! that was incredable rght amount of smut, Yet an amazing plot. Christ on a crutch! writeingis your strong suite.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - General nazor on February 11, 2006
    I went through a lot of emotions when I read this, from Glee to HATRED,from enjoyment to wishing I had never read some of thoes lines(T.M.I. Dash/Helen/Bob(don't want to know you like that!!)And FINALY(About chapter 6)Things got to where they
    were suposed to be!
    B+ (maby a bit more.)
    Oh yeah Vi/Dash WOULD NEVER HAPPEN IN A MILLION YEARS!!!!
    HE ANT NO MAN! HES HER BROTHER!!!!~>[

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hawksinger on February 07, 2006
    Wow.... This was an amazing fanfiction... i used up all but nine minutes of my 103 minutes on a computer at the library to read it... i just kept me begging for more... the author could be a pro, with their style, and prose. I loved it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jareth on January 30, 2006
    Good story overall...the sex scenes were imaginative, though some of the dialogue was a bit lame. I'd get a beta reader, too, you've got lots of typos. The story in the later chapters was just plain awesome, good going there...but I'm going to go tell the folks that made the Daredevil and Powerpuff Girls movies that you're using their lines. :P
    I think a sequel is in order. Shifter breaks Phychewave out of jail, maybe uses a different form for a change? And sex, of course. Lots more sex. I could totally see Dash getting frustrated and threating to tell Vi's boy what she did with him, if she doesn't agree to do it again. Regularly. Or is that just me being evil?

    Report Review

  • From ANON - exodus on January 08, 2006
    Great no FANTASTIC fan fic best incredibles maybe best over ALL. To bad it has to end.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fan on December 09, 2005
    sweeeeeeeetnesss! darkness, smut, PLOT, you've got everything here! top notch!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kat on November 27, 2005
    ...
    ...
    ...wow...that was...incredible...
    I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - James K. on November 26, 2005
    Excellent. Keep going!

    I kinda had a feeling early on that Psychewave would end up being someone beyond what he was, but I had no idea that you were leading Vi down the "dark side". It was an interesting twist, indeed.

    Keep up the good work!

    James
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Exodus on November 17, 2005
    Wow this is the greatest incredibles fiction yet!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jake. on September 28, 2005
    A fantastic story, if a little too angsty. But then again thats probably my own relationship trouble speaking :P more more more!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!